I don't think I buy 15 year olds acting quite so stupidly. Because they aren't that stupid. Not really. And especially not with Hermione around. There's just no way they would be that careless.
Harry's behaviour seems to be acting out--he's rather pissed at his Dad re the Imperio. But Tobias' discipline is quite impressive. Surprised to see Hermoine giving lip, though.
Excellent chapter although i doesn't seem smart to stay in Riddle's house.I like the stern Tobias.Is there going to be any more issues concerning the Sirius,Tobias and Harry relationship in the father and son way?It would develop the story a lot.:D
It's strange there are parts about this chapter I like and others I just don't. There's just something off with it to me. I think it mainly consists of how Un-angry Harry really is acting about the whole Imperio being put on him. That's a reeeaaally big deal in their world, they call it unforgivable! I dunno, some forgiveness I think came to early in that area but its not over yet so I will wait and see what you come up with.
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