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Reviews For Brothers and Fathers
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
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Author's Response: Thanks Ria! I'm glad you liked it! *hugs Ria* Thanks!
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I read your Story untill the End and I want you to know that I really liked it. I didn't look up if you have pasted a sequel so far but if there is one, I will read it. Sorry if you find some mistakes in my Review, my English is not really good because I'm German. Kuroi Author's Response: Hi! Don't worry about your review it was wonderful! I'm glad you liked the story and there is a sequel called "Brothers, Fathers, and Professors". If you go to the main page of "Brothers and Fathers" there should be a link to it. Thanks for reading!
Loved the almost identical dismissal she received from Tobias and Severus. Funny ending. Very good story, and your OC's were much the best of it, a very rare occurance in fanfic. Severus's (Severus'); breath(e); Dursley's & Weasley's (are not possessive, yet you got Grangers right in the same sentence yet); eleven-year-old; for a while (awhile); accompanied with (should be 'by'); after saying (good)bye' a couple (of) portraits said (that) they saw him; through (thorough); her youngest (younger); at a run(;) he was run-down(-)looking; as (s)he took a sip; Eileen sat (set) the goblet kittens (kitten's) meow; as (at) his son's horror-stricken Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Elieen and Tobias are probably my favorite characters in this story. Thanks for all the reviews! |
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