Excellent chapter! I think you did a good job on Voldemort although I'm surprised he didn't do anything to Harry yet. I imagine Harry's scar hurt with Voldie around as well. Peter owes Harry a life debt... will he help them at all?
I think Voldemort was perfect. And so was Eileen and Tobias. Now who walked through the door???
| Title: In the Dark of the Night
| 04 Jul 2007 2:27 pm
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| Reviewer: jay_09 (Anonymous)
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argh he's not dead is he? He can't be dead. That would just...well it's wrong....sort of. Your story though. Please please tell me you haven't abandoned this story and that you are going to update this story soon. Oh and can harry kick some butt. pls pretty please...or you know whatever it is you have decided.
| Title: In the Dark of the Night
| 02 Jul 2007 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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Oh, that is just mean and cruel to leave it at that point. And please don't kill off Harry's dad. Great story-I love Tobias s. How did LV see through the Fidelis on Grimmald Place? Only Dumbledore could have given him the address.
| Title: In the Dark of the Night
| 28 Jun 2007 8:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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How are you going to explain Voldemort finding Grimmauld Place? Only the secret keeper can reveal the location. Given the problem with Peter Pettigrew the first time around, there's no way anyone but the leader of the Order would be named Secret Keeper - so how does he find the house?
Other than that question, I LOVE the story. The characterizations are excellent. Snape is not fluffy as he becomes in some stories. And you get a chance to see where some of his stern nature comes from. Keep up the great writing.
| Title: In the Dark of the Night
| 28 Jun 2007 8:16 am
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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You can't stop there! Please update soon! I hope Tobias is not dead. Can't imagine why he did not hear anything. How did Voldemort get past the Fidelious charm?
Please update soon!
| Title: In the Dark of the Night
| 28 Jun 2007 7:09 am
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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OMG! NOOOO! Tobias is... green lighted? NOOO! Voldie is in HQ? AND YOU LEFT HIM THERE!??? Come back here! You can't let him in there! Oh brother. We're in for a long, hard wait. I hope Harry gets him this time.
Noooooooooooo! Not a cliffy! Pretty please with cherries on top and lots of whipped cream and whatever else you'd like on it update again soon!!
i just found your story
it was great but i don't like Eileen it seems like she loves them but then again it dosn't.....she's just evil
but the storys good write more please
| Title: It Takes Two
| 16 Jun 2007 10:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous)
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Oh, poor lil Sev. Great chapter
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