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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Boys Will Be Boys 28 May 2007 9:31 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww it's so cute seeing them interact together. Excellent chapter and I really look forward to reading about the camping trip. Please update again as soon as you can! :)
Title: Beyond Doubt 28 May 2007 9:29 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really, really like this different sort of character, the Muggle middle aged man being brought in. I really like the dynamics as well. I can tell that this is going to be an intersting chapter. :) There were some places where the grammer, punctuation was not quite right. You should probably go back over it and add in more commas, or restructure some paragraphs. Especially the first and third ones. Nice start to the story so far! :)
Title: O'Brother 28 May 2007 9:25 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this line: "I apologize for being late, but I returned to my home to find it occupied with deatheaters. After... pleasantries and curses were exchanged they set my house on fire. I got out what I could...but... I believe I will need to stay at Hogwarts for the time being." Poor Snape! And nice plot manuvering. I really liked how Dumbledore and Snape did Occlumency/Legilimency with each other. Nice chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I hope you take a moment to reread it since this chapter was Beta'd.
Title: Any Dream Will Do 28 May 2007 9:20 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice twist with the deaging part!
Title: Sneaking, Slithering, Snapes 28 May 2007 9:11 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Thats very cool how they joined together to prank thier dad!
Title: What is this Feeling? 28 May 2007 9:03 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice prank on Snape! :)
Title: Boys Will Be Boys 28 May 2007 8:40 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Definately an awesome story. I enjoyed my evening with it. I can't wait for updates. I'm especially interested in how you deal with their relationship once school starts. Should be fun!
Title: Getting To Know You 28 May 2007 8:38 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    His favorite book is One Flew Over the Cuckoo's NEst? Well thats certainly interesting. I wouldn't have figured Snape the type to like that book but it works though, :)
Title: Life With Father 28 May 2007 5:57 am
Reviewer: SlytherinShadowKat (Signed) [Report This]
    This is interesting. I'd like to see where it goes.

    kate

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'll be posting more soon.
Title: Life With Father 28 May 2007 2:17 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww cute ending! Great chapter! :)

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.


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