Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Second Chance
Title: Chapter 8 Toddler Troubles 07 Dec 2007 3:43 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is one of the more delightful de-aged Harry stories. They are having fun! You have the cadence for a young child pretty much down pat. Severus is being such a good dad. Too bad the Dark Lizard is still out there.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so very much for the lovely review and I apologize that it has taken me so long to respond. I am thrilled that you are enjoying the story. And glad that you think I've got the child like stuff down. I think that comes from being in education and having taught everything from 4 year olds up to 18 year old high school kiddos. Yes, Sev is a great dad...whether he wants to be or will admit it or not. As for the 'dark lizard' (had to snicker at that one)...he is very much still there, unfortunately, and no one should forget that.

    Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :)

    Fox

Title: Chapter 8 Toddler Troubles 07 Dec 2007 1:14 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Another cute chapter! Poor Snape get's to have so much fun dealing with Harry and his new favorite word. Good chapter and I hope for more again soon!

    Author's Response:

    Poor Snape indeed. He has enought trouble with 11 year olds when they first get to Hogwarts, let alone a stubborn but oh so cute three year old. He might as well give it up now. :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I'm sorry it's taken me forever to respond to your kind words. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story though.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 8 Toddler Troubles 07 Dec 2007 12:00 am
Reviewer: lyra (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww. I hope Harry doesn't age all at once...

    Author's Response: Hehe...you will be able to find out more about the aging part in the next chapter, which will be up soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 8 Toddler Troubles 06 Dec 2007 11:12 pm
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was totally cute, I loved the fact that Harry tried to bargain with Severus over dinner about dessert. Poor Draco he was completely right though about Severus being a mother hen. Looking forward to Harry getting bigger (not too much bigger though), and the problems and adventures to come. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. lES

    Author's Response:

    First of all I apologize for not responding to your lovely review before now. Real life hit with the holidays and only now is easing off some.

    Sev would argue the mother hen bit (but we all know better ;) ). As for Harry getting bigger, you will find out a bit more about that in the next chapter and trust me, there will be plenty more adventures and problems!

    Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing and I'm very glad you are enjoying the story.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 7 - A New Friend 05 Dec 2007 7:29 pm
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love, love, love your Harry. He is just so darn cute, and I'm not surprised at all that Snape is finding himself more and more attached to the little guy. Who wouldn't fall in love with him? Well, Voldemort, I guess. And maybe Bellatrix Lestrange.

    So, is Morgan to be a love interest for Snape? Or is she just a new friend for the two of them? I like her. She seems pretty smart and intuitive.

    Thanks so much for the update. Hope to hear more from you soon. Take care and have a Merry Christmas.....

    Author's Response:

    Awww, thank you so very much. I'm glad that you like my little Harry. He's a lovable bundle of mischief that just makes his presence known while I write. And as you said, not many could help loving him. Sev isn't about to openly say it or show it...at least he's going to try not to, lol...but he is really starting to care about Harry.

    As for Morgan, at the moment they are all just going to be friends. Who knows what might happen later though. When I came up with her it wasn't for a love interest. But she's smart and strong willed a bit, so if she decides to be interested in Sev, well, I'll write it. :D

    You are very welcome for the update and thank YOU for reading and giving such a lovely review. I'm almost done with the next chapter so hopefully you will have another to read soon. Have a Merry Christmas as well!

    Fox

Title: Chapter 7 - A New Friend 05 Dec 2007 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute chapter! That's nice that Harry was able to play with the dog. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and more should be along shortly.
Title: Chapter 7 - A New Friend 05 Dec 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    yeah an update, thanks for that BTW. This chapter is really cute, it's so funny that Harry thinks of Lancelot as Pup-pup, very cute. It was intresting to see that Severus took Harry back just because he enjoyed playing with the dog. It seems our snarky potions master is losing a little bit of that the more time he spends with Harry. Keep up the awesome work I'm really looking forward to the next chapter so please please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review. I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. A little boy needs a dog to play with, even if it's not really his own, lol. And yes, our snarky Sev is really beginning to care about the little brat he is saddled with, but he still will do his best to keep that hidden. I'm going to update very soon since the next chapter is nearly done. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. :)
Title: Chapter 6 - Out and About 15 Nov 2007 8:11 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I adore this story! Please, please update soon. It would make my truly happy. I love it, so cute and sweet and funny.

    Author's Response: So sorry for the late response. Thank you very much for your review and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Considering that little Harry decided to play a lot lately an update should be posted shortly. :)
Title: Chapter 6 - Out and About 13 Sep 2007 11:55 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter! I love this story.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and I apologize for the lateness of this response.
Title: Chapter 6 - Out and About 12 Aug 2007 11:11 pm
Reviewer: honore (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is whipped, and so am I. Yeah, Harry has him wrapped around his little fingers. Looking forward to more. Thanks

    Author's Response: Well, not quite totally wrapped, but it's awfully close, lol. I think I would have folded a while back. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and thanks for reading and reviewing.

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5