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Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 11 Jul 2007 1:05 am
Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i feel warm and fuzzy.

    i -like- feeling warm and fuzzy, though, so you are forgiven!!! *feels magnanimous*

    hehe, don't mind me! i'm a sleep-deprived little belle at the moment with no clue of what she is saying, except that she...needs...sleep...*dozes off*

    anyways, i read your responses to my reviews!!! you have no clue how excited i get when i get a response to my reviews, haha! i'm relatively new to this whole reviewing phenomenon (doesn't it sound fantastic like that?) so yeah, it just added to the whole feeling of warm fuzziness.

    XD

    i can definitely imagine a grumpy snape trying to sneer away at all of harry's buddies trampling all over his quarters! and seriously, what with harry being the most adorable little gryffindor around, he won't have a lack of said buddies!!!

    and i think it's adorable when harry cuddles with snape! usually, i get all ticked off at those scenes and end up muttering about "those fanfic writers nowadays," but here, harry's so little and snape's so embarassed about it i just go awwwwwwwwww!!!!!

    i also like your whole writing style. the sort of humor that runs through just plain narration is really appealing! it's something i've been working on in my writing, to try to get my own voice that i can keep total control over mood, and you do a wonderful job with it!

    so yes, feel very special now :-)...i can't wait for new chapters for both this and "Connections"!

    Author's Response:

    Awww...Belle, thank you so very very much! Since it has taken me like forever to respond this time, I'm guessing/hoping you aren't sleep deprived now, lol. Even so it was a long and wonderful review and I love it. To me getting reviews or responses to the reviews that I give is a GREAT feeling. Okay, so it might take me a month to respond, but I will always try to.

    Glad that you like the cuddles. I'm a total mush person and proud of it! :D Angst and such is great too, but I gotta have warm fuzzies somewhere in the mix.

    Thank you, thank you for your very kind words about my writing style. I've had other people describe it before and I'm thinking, sheesh, I do all THAT??!! LOL...to me it's just whatever flows through my mind onto paper. But I'm glad that you enjoy what I come up with.

    Another chapter for Second Chance is ready and will be posted tonight, but Connections is proving a problem with the next part. Snape is being somewhat uncooperative. *frowns at Sev*

    At any rate, thanks tons again for reading and your wonderful review.

    Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 10 Jul 2007 7:52 pm
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aaaaawwwwwwww, this is so so so sweet. He is so cute and inocent that even Snape is falling for him
    Keep writing

    Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and I'm glad you are enjoying it. Snape is indeed being slowly won over and once started there is no hope for turning back, lol.
Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 10 Jul 2007 4:18 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying this story. I have to admit that some babyfics that I have read in the past tend to annoy me because of the excessive baby talk...lol. But your story doesn't at all. It's adorable, and I absolutely loved the scene where Snape was stroking Harry's hair unknowingly.

    Great job with this chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much, Jade. And I can totally understand where you're coming from with the baby talk issue. A little goes a long way to me. Perhaps it's just me and having worked with daycare and kindergarten kids for years, but I abhor too much sugar sweet lisping and such from a four or five year old. Kids don't really speak like that all the time, especially a little boy as smart as our Harry. :D As for Snape and his unconcious caring gestures...well, he's starting to melt more than he thinks.

    Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

     Fox

Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 10 Jul 2007 3:45 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    aww.... i want one of those balls....

    Author's Response: LOL...it would have come in handy to amuse my kiddo when he was younger! I dreamed that one up by thinking what my son liked as a toddler and trying to turn an ordinary toy into something more 'magical'. Glad you liked the idea and thanks for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 10 Jul 2007 2:10 pm
Reviewer: teddylonglong (Signed) [Report This]
    A very nice, cute chapter - thanks for sharing it with us. I'm looking forward to more interactions between Snape and toddler Harry :-)

    Author's Response: Thank you so much and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. More interaction coming up in the next chapter...which hopefully will be up tonight. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 5 - Potions, Punishments, and Presents 10 Jul 2007 8:42 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww cute ending! Snape is falling for this kid if he got suckered into playing ball with little Harry. Hrmm...Will Harry remeber all this when he get's to his normal age?

    Author's Response: Oh yes, Snape is definitely falling, but he refuses to jump in like some, lol. As for Harry remembering it....we will have to wait and see. *grins and gives evil laugh* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Title: Chapter 4 - Settling In 23 Jun 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww cute chapter! I loved the fact that Draco was being nice and playing with little Harry. Excellent story so far!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Draco is a sweetie...when he wants to be, lol.
Title: Chapter 4 - Settling In 23 Jun 2007 4:13 am
Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    'Tis so adorable!!! *hugs everybody in vicinity*

    i can just picture good ol' snape talking calmly to harry as he thumps draco's poor abused head, lol!

    ahh yess....the mini mike-anjellos in the making....snape must be so proud...

    i love their banter, and absolutely can't wait for more draco-harry-snape involvement...thanks for the amazing story!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind feedback and there will be more interaction with my trio of "boys." :) Of course, Sev might be less than thrilled about some of that. *snicker*
Title: Chapter 4 - Settling In 23 Jun 2007 2:38 am
Reviewer: celestialuna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awesome chapter. I loved how harry and draco intereacted.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. There will be more Harry and Draco interaction in future. :)
Title: Chapter 4 - Settling In 22 Jun 2007 3:26 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    lil' harry is so adorable!

    Author's Response: Thank you! :) Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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