| Title: Diagon Alley and Very Annoying People
| 13 Jan 2011 3:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Severus and Rita were together?! That is disgusting! Bellatrix would have been better.
Have I mentioned how much I love this series? I would go on, but I fear sounding like a broken record.
Excellent!
| Title: Badges, Wands, and Serpents
| 13 Mar 2009 7:05 am
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| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Anonymous)
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“Talking to the raven. He is very smart. And the fox.”
“The fox?” said Harry in confusion. “Who is the fox? Hed? Hed, answer me!”
“You will know in time. Not now. Now is not the time.”
“Why not!?”
“Because you have class,” replied Hedwig matter-of-factly.
ROFL!!!!
| Title: All is Fair in War
| 03 Aug 2008 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: TangledPencils (Anonymous)
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I'm having a wonderful time reading your fics and thoroughly enjoying them. Well done with all of them, now I'm off to the next exciting installment. Cheers.
| Title: Exams, Reporters, and the Third Task
| 19 Jun 2007 12:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Kitty (Anonymous)
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Oooooh I haaaaaate you. Cliffie? That's just mean. Would you be able to add me to your mailing list if you have one? I'm not registered on this site. I am on deviantart though: kitty-maree-dahlila.deviantart.com
Many thanks. Please update...or I may flame.
I was under the impression that Neville's parents were tortured before or very shortly after Harry's parents were killed. After all, the Death Eaters were rounded up very shortly after Voldemort's demise, and no one would want to risk Azkaban yet again by revealing themselves as Death Eaters three years after Voldemort was destroyed. You're pretty good at writing, and you clearly have a spell-check program that you're using, but I would recommend a beta-reader to edit a few things a bit. You have a good command of some aspects of language (i.e. using Mister for Lucius and Master for Draco), but some parts of the storyline could use some work. Also, you might want to cite that you're taking a lot more story from the books than is typical in fanfiction. I'm not a copyright lawyer, but I think you might be pushing your luck.
yayy! Chapter was awesome (of course). I was wondering if you were going to introduce SPEW. Well- great chapter, and update soon! (actually, you're really good at updating, and I really appreciate it!!)
great chapter! I love how you relate everything, so while its AU, its also related to the real story and the storyline's not screwed up ^^ update soon!
FINALLY! Malfoy gets what he deserves! Update soon!
great chapter! can't wait for the next!!
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