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Title: When I'm Gone 11 Feb 2024 5:24 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so stirring! Beautifully done.
Title: When I'm Gone 15 Aug 2022 10:48 pm
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully poignant.
Title: When I'm Gone 14 Jun 2019 6:08 pm
Reviewer: ARim (Signed) [Report This]
    Like it a lot.
    More of those two, please.
    Also,I adore 'Breaking down' by 'Death. is Batman' (you?) on FFnet.
    Please do take that snippet up again; you really caught them in action and Harry is desolate. Can Snape help him and alleviate his own sadness?
Title: When I'm Gone 22 Jun 2009 5:31 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! I didn't really like the song fic format, it seemed to cut into the flow of the story a little bit, but I really enjoyed the opening descriptions of Snape - his hair and eyes and the night. Very good job with that, and for his thoughts. They are very in character and very encompassing. I felt that Harry's speech was a little too sure and introspective of the canon Harry, too insightful of Snape, but it was good how they connected. It was kind of a scary ending, just hanging like that, worrying about what they would do next, if they would do anything. Snape seems like he's done with everything, with the Order and everything. Knowing that Harry is too, will they stay or go? I guess that they don't have a choice. I guess that I feel a little hanging, like there should be more.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :). I was really into writing songfics at that moment in time. ;). More of a ...Glimpse...into what "could be" than anything else. 
Title: When I'm Gone 08 Apr 2008 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I don't know what else to say. It's sad, dark, deep and yet at the same time "happy" in the end. Im not sure if you know what I mean but that was the way I felt after finshing the story, somehow content althoug it wasn't really a happy ending :) Anyway loved it!

    Author's Response: I do understand. *Wink*. That's how I felt when I wrote it! Awesome that you as a reader connected to it in the same way. :). Thank you very much for your much needed compliments. :D. You just made my day. ;)
Title: When I'm Gone 02 Sep 2007 6:32 pm
Reviewer: Ripuku (Signed) [Report This]
    wow. that is so dark. I love it! You rock!

    Author's Response: Ripuku, thank you so much! :) I was going more for angst than dark, but that's all good. One generally leads to the other. lol. Thank you for the great review!!!
Title: When I'm Gone 29 Jun 2007 9:51 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my poor English!...If only I could use here my native language, I'd have said much more. But I'll try.
    This story left something strange inside me after reading it. Something sad and grievous, but still enchanting for a bit. I'd like to think that night encounter would impove Harry's relationship with Snape - I'm rather optimistic on that point)))
    The story is REALLY good!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I also have an optimistic view of this meeting. ANYTHING could happen after my little song fic ended, but I like to think that this experience drew them closer. Gave them an understanding about each other...yeah. I really enjoyed writing it! ;) Thank you for your wonderful review. You made a fangirl very happy today!
Title: When I'm Gone 06 Jun 2007 6:33 pm
Reviewer: nightwisp (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked it, haven't read a good song fic in awhile. I espically liked Harry's monalouge at the end.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!! I enjoyed writing the monolouge. lol. Songfics are my happy place. ;) I am glad that you liked it.

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