I throughly enjoyed that chapter...especially the scene in the carriage on the way back to Hogwarts. :)
| Title: Chapter 4
| 22 Jun 2007 5:03 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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Wow....um...that was quite an interesting story...if not a bit wierd... Hope you can update soon!
Wow, that was a pretty good chapter. I love to hear people's insights into why Snape is as he is. I loved your scene in his quarters.
This story is extremely original, and I love it! I was not expecting Snape to be sitting in his room with a bottle of whiskey by the end of this chapter. I sympathize with him loads in this story, and I like how you've given him some depth as a character. Can't wait for more!
"As long as he was Severus Snape, he would be mocked and ridiculed. The only answer was to strike first, strike fast, strike hard. To not give them a chance to hurt him first. His face sometimes felt as if it had frozen into a stiff, cold mask. All the better, for what lay ahead."
I think you have really nailed the crux of Snape's character right there...nicely done!
This is a great story, and I hope you will update frequently. :)
I'm quite worried about Severus...and I rather wish Harry had told someone what he saw.
Interesting chaqpter! Will Snape tell Harry eventually the reason why he joined Voldemort? Keep up the great writing!
Very interesting chapter. I like the idea that he is learning to function despite the pain.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 18 Jun 2007 5:32 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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That was awesome! Hope you can update soon!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 18 Jun 2007 2:18 am
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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That was an awesome story/chapter hope you can update soon!
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