This is so bittersweet and it's so... I dont know, I dont think nostaligic is the word I'm looking for but wistful maybe? To read it and have the song in your head at the same time, to think of him humming it, it's sort of sad but the lyrics give a bit of hope at least ^-^ Very beautiful little fic ^^
Any story based on a Beatles song is brilliant by me! I love the Beatles and I love this story. Great twist, making us think, and the whole thing a riddle at the same time.
I'd love to read more of your stories.
Aww. Really great piece. Such a strong opening paragraph that really feels incredibly genuine. Well done!
Oh, wow, sad, and...wow. Great story, really makes you think, you know? Thanks!
-Elise
| Title: Here comes the sun
| 19 Jun 2007 3:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Smelly Cat (Anonymous)
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I love the Beatles!! LOL good fic kind of sad.
I just read this over on ff.net but thought I'd review here. I love this piece. Really atmospheric and beautifully done. Maybe it's just me, but I get a little confused at the end. Well, scratch that. I think I'm pretty clear on when I'm seeing Snape versus Harry's pov, but I don't quite get the transitions. You should post "Normal Things" here as well, since it fits with "I Capture the Castle." That too, is an excellent piece.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I was going to post normal things, but as Harry isn't directly featured in it (because it's a companion fic and everything), I don't know if that's against the rules or anything. I'll have to ask Jan, but thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad that you like it really.
This is quite well done. Very spare and subtle. I especially loved the line, "Remus Lupin always looked as though he was about to keel over of some foreign disease."
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. To be honest, I was doubting this one after I wrote it. I'm so glad that you liked it. ;)
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