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Title: Observation and Reflection 20 Apr 2024 4:29 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I’m re-reading this and enjoying it!
Title: Observation and Reflection 25 Apr 2022 12:03 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant opening chapter! One of the best I’ve read in a long time.
Title: Observation and Reflection 01 Jul 2008 11:31 pm
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your use of present-tense is a bit disconcerting. Most fiction is written in past-tense.

    Author's Response:

    You're kidding. I had no idea. Let me go change my entire story now that you've pointed out that I've deviated from the standard form.

     

    ;-)

Title: Observation and Reflection 02 Dec 2007 3:19 am
Reviewer: supergirl_3684 (Signed) [Report This]
    that was a great beginning! I can't wait to finish reading this fic!
Title: Observation and Reflection 19 Oct 2007 5:33 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    This has most definitely caught my interest. *grin*
Title: Observation and Reflection 17 Sep 2007 10:18 am
Reviewer: LizBee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus is so terribly cynical. I'd have accepted Harry's apology. I thought it was rather noble.

    On the other hand, I find myself strangely keen to find out what happens next...
Title: Observation and Reflection 26 Aug 2007 4:09 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. This is like ... REALLY good. Go Snape XD. He and Harry are very IC, which is awesome, and also I really like how this story is written in present tense, which really grabs my attention. Wow XD
Title: Observation and Reflection 26 Aug 2007 5:05 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Dumbledore has you wrapped up tighter than a maiden's virtue during the summer-"

    ... lol
Title: Observation and Reflection 23 Aug 2007 3:48 pm
Reviewer: smelly cat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!! I like!
Title: Observation and Reflection 20 Aug 2007 9:47 am
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello! I've read your story, but I like it...so I'm going back to review because I've recently figured out as a new fanfic author that it's the polite and fun thing to do! ;)

    It took me a bit to get used to the present tense in your writing since it's not the most common, but you keep it consistent, and it really works well. Good job!

    I also had to comment that I loved this part:

    "The boy's head jerks up from over his cauldron, and his eyes meet Snape's, wary and a little fearful.

    Despite the fact that the first sixth year Potions class of the term is nearly over and no one in it has provided Snape a single excuse to take points from Gryffindor, the boy's look is enough to fill him with a warm, satisfied glow."

    Hehe! I love that - fearful student eyes being Snape's key to happiness! Right on!

    Author's Response:

    THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY. Because I love "O Mine Enemy" so very very much, any approval from you is immensely valued.

     

    And I'm glad you liked that line, I keep putting things into the story that make me laugh and I have to wonder if I have the world's strangest sense of humor or if anyone else is laughing with me...:) 


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