Intriguing. Draws the reader right in. Great job! I'm glad I didn't start reading before there were more chapters, or I would be going crazy not knowing what happens next. :-)
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 13 Aug 2007 12:47 am
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| Reviewer: honore (Signed)
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Great job on this so far.... I love it. Thanks
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Solitare (Signed)
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Very good start I look forward to reading more...
skittles
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 4:46 am
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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Fantastic story! You have done Snape with his inner ramblings just as I thought they must be. You have him just as ill suited for the job he's doing as I always imagined. Perfect! And Harry's apology was fantastic. The thoughts you had him spill out were so beautifully heartfelt and deep. I know I'm going to love this story.
| Title: Observation and Reflection
| 27 Jun 2007 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice start! At first the POV seemed weird because i'm not used to reading first person, but the style really works. It has more of a directness I find that I'm enjoying very much.
I liked Harry's apology, and how you ended the chapter was just right. A cliffhanger, but there's more to read. Hooray!
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