Your writing is superb. I can feel every emotion the way you’ve intended it to be. It all feels very realistic.
| Title: Reticence
| 19 Mar 2014 12:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying this story. I adore the way you write.
| Title: Reticence
| 09 Aug 2011 3:02 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Although this story is very good, the use of a very obscure word was a bit annoying, as I had to stop reading the story to look up hagiography--{;-)
Oh, this is GOOD STUFF so far! I've got to get used to the present tense, though...
This was a fantastic chapter. I lol when I read 'I am a wizard Potter, not a Troglodyte. Brilliant!
Can't wait to see Harry and DD in the next chap.
Thanks for the entertainment.
Poor Harry! My heart breaks for him! I'm glad Snape decided to take charge and get albus though i admit...I'm nervous about Albus' reaction!
*grin* so good!! >< hahaha
| Title: Reticence
| 17 Sep 2007 10:25 am
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| Reviewer: LizBee (Anonymous)
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Severus is a magnificent bastard. And quite right, too.
I find myself relieved, though, that he's chosen to believe and accept Harry's earlier apology. It ... means something to me.
I AM SO COMPELLED THAT I COMPLETELY FORGOT ABOUT MY OWN FIC. Damn you.
"I know what a car is, Potter, I am a wizard, not a troglodyte."
I just want you to know that that is probably the most perfect sentence I have ever read.
If there is one thing that Severus Snape definately can do, it is introduce a fangirl to a whole plethora of new vocabulary XD (and it inspires me to write long words, lol). You rock!
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