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Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 5:40 am
Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Can't wait for the next update and Harry's talk with Dumbledore!
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 5:39 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! Ooo so what will Albus say now?
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 4:30 am
Reviewer: animealam (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this story is excellent :)

    You have managed to explain quite well how Severus point of view about Harry changes fast. I can't wait to read more and see what Dumbledore's reaction is. Are you going to make him good, manipulative, or evil?

    Author's Response: I hope to make him in-character---and I have very definite opinions about Dumbledore's character. :-)
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 3:48 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 3:29 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    This is very well written. I like the intensity as well as the extremely believable dialog. The only concern I have is the use of present tense. You're doing quite well with it, but present tense can be very difficult to sustain over a long period.

    Your Snape and Harry are both much in character. I loved Harry's reasoning behind why he doesn't want to know whether or not Dumbledore really knew about what the Dursleys were really like. And I very much hope that Snape is right about Dumbledore. Everyone has a different "take" on what Dumbledore is like. Actually, I think he's more like you have Snape describe him. And if anyone should know, it would be Snape.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. You're not wrong about everyone having a different take on Dumbledore---but I have very firm opinions about what I think he's like and what he's capable of. And, not to give too much away, but I usually stick my opinions in Snape's mouth, so make of that what you will. :-)

    Incidentally, I write in the present tense so much that nowadays I find it almost impossible to write past tense---I keep slipping back into present without noticing. :)
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 2:37 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story. Very intense. Liked the interplay between Snape and Harry.
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 1:49 am
Reviewer: Shadowdog85 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I love this story please update soon!
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 1:47 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no fair you can't leave it there! This is just to big a cliffy, we want another chapter please.
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 12:41 am
Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for changing the name, I thought I had already read this one until I really got into it. The present tense is a little weird though, but I guess it will work if you keep it consistent.
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 12:18 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it! Great story, I love the way you deal with Snape's emotions and reactions to Harry. Nice take on the usual scenario/plotline, I've really enjoyed reading it!

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