I'm amazed at how well you've written Dumbledore. He's really hard to do (which is why in my own stories I got rid of him right from the start... LOL). Your characterization was spot on in this chapter. Fantastic!
If you ever need a beta, I'd be happy to go over the story and fix the (very few) mistakes. It's just minor things, like in the first chapter you have "At least, he thinks, he isn't the only the only member of staff."
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 30 Jun 2007 8:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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I like this story very much and look forward for a new chapter!
NOOOOOOO UPDATE!!!!!
I love this story, and I've only read this chapter. I love the use of the present tense here, and the characterisations were so spot on. Finally a fic where Harry is not a whimpering coward and Snape does not become instantly kind and caring and sappy. I love this, trully. I'm so glad I've just found it. Amazing. Please update soon.
Snape smiled?!? Ahhh! IS the world ending??
Great chapter! God, I hope Snape and Dumbledore tear the Dursleys to pieces...or hex them...or something...lol. This story is so well-written. I love it :)
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Whooo! loved it! Oh, so great. Everyone was so wonderfully in charcter, Dumbledore most of all. Fantastic job on him. I love the ending too- how they're going to go, how Snape wants to. And the hint Dumbledore gives us over the "keeper" remark. Lovely. Thank you so much for the update! :)
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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That was interesting. Hope theres some hexing in the next one!
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous)
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Ahh... Snape meets the Dursleys! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!
Good chapter... Poor Harry, he's been through so much.
Well can't wait for the next update!!!
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Fabulous! I love this chapter - I think you've gotten Dumbledore just right! I love it!
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