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Title: A Conversation 26 Aug 2007 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    The relationship between Severus and Dumbledore is so nicely detailed! I luff them XD
Title: A Conversation 05 Jul 2007 12:53 am
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cant wait to see what happens. Please update soon!!!
Title: A Conversation 05 Jul 2007 12:16 am
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying this. Its nice to have a story that's in presnt tense that isn't written badly. (Not that all storries written in present tense are bad- this fic is proof. :)
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 7:41 pm
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A cliffhanger? I wasn't expecting that. But thank for being able to update so soon next time....

    Can't wait to see what happens next!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 6:26 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Your characterization of Snape is spot on. Well done. There are really very few writers who catch his voice this well. And you get Dumbledore *just* as well. I particularly liked Dumbledore getting so amused at the idea of putting Snape at the Dursleys. And this line was excellent for its insight:

    "He thinks you do not care, so he is frank with you."

    I like that, because it lays a good foundation/explanation for Harry opening up to Snape.
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 5:01 pm
Reviewer: rene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i think, and forgive me, i'm not some sort of brilliant creative writing professor, but i still think that your strong point is dialog. you do it so beautifully...

    XD

    and i'd also like to say i can't wait for your update!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved the conversation between the two. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 1:53 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the fact, that Snape didn't keep his promise and *told* Dumbles. It just seems so seemless with the Snape character... I think you've hit Snape's characterisation dead centre. Enjoying this fic very much. : )
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 11:50 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo! Nice buildup! I enjoyed the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore. Very in character, and still entertaining, even though it was just a chapter of a discussion. Good job!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Dawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story. I just want to point out something I noted while reading this chapter. At the beginning it states that Dumbledore and Snape will apparate from the pub, but at the end of the chapter they floo. It is hardly a big deal, since people naturally change their minds. But I thought I'd point it out just in case it mattered to you. Apart from that the story has been brilliant to read so far and I hope you continue until its conclusion.

    Author's Response:

    Argh! I meant to change that----originally they were going to apparate, but then I decided to give them time to talk. I thought I'd caught all the earlier apparition references. Thank you for pointing it out!

     


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