Oh, I always find myself wishing that Snape had done more to Vernon.
They were so restrained! I hope that appropriate retribution will be served at some point.
wow I could see my self a fly on the wall during this all well done
Y'know, its ashame Vernon doesn't know /exactly/ what dear Severus is capable of...
Bravo! I loved this! And such restraint on Severus' part! Admirable indeed. (Got used to the present tense!)
Bravo! Go Snape! Yeah, you tell him! *grin*
| Title: Making Amends
| 30 Aug 2007 6:25 am
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| Reviewer: brad (Anonymous)
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Great chapter; great story! You write perfectly, professional grade.
I loved the picture stuck to the wall of the cupboard; that's one of my favourite 'poor Harry' scenes, one of his friends visiting his cupboard and seeing a picture, or a scribbled message ('my name is Harry and I am six today'), something, like that.
I really thought that you were going to have Snape leave Dursley locked in the cupboard; I'm surprised you left him off the hook!
(By the way, this site's used of a five-digit security code for posted reviews is *too* difficult, this is my third attempt to post this)
Love it, love it! Everyone is so wonderful in this chapter - very in character. Poor Vernon...if I didn't dislike him so much, I'd feel kind of sorry for him. Heck, I'm a Muggle and even I know better than to try to chum up to Snape!
I knew Dumbledore had it in him to to make threats XD. And Snape! My new favourite character (well, not exactly a new favourite - more like a long-standing favourite that I am currently falling right back in love with XD)
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