That’s quite a cliffhanger chapter ending!
I loved this bedside conversation.
oh...a cliffhanger! I'm so glad I'm reading this now! I would've died had I been reading it as you were posting! LOVE the dialogue between Snape and Harry!
Cliffy! *grin* haha Great chapter! I love the interaction between Harry and Snape. (:
Title: Things Unspoken
| 17 Sep 2007 10:43 am
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Reviewer: LizBee (Anonymous)
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*sigh*
YOU'RE DOING THIS TO TORTURE ME, I KNOW IT.
I have to admire the way you've captured the character's voices, and the characterisation of Harry. It's all quite good. I like it.
Aw, Snape! How sweet are you! I love how he prefaces his little speech by telling Harry that if he tells anyone else what Snape says, he will call him a liar. hehe :)
I do hope Harry is okay...but seeing as how there's a sequel... :)
Oooh, cliffhanger. I know people hate cliffhangers, but I love them (even though the next chapter is like one click away, but whatever). I love how Snape is all like I'm-trying-to-pretend-I-hate-you-and-keep-my-reputation-intact-even-though-I-don't-really-hate-you-any-more-and-I'm-having-serious-doubts-about-whether-or-not-I've-ever-really-hated-you. Yeah. That was a really long run-on sentence, but it's about 3 o'clock in the morning here and I'm determined to finish reviewing this story XD
Author's Response: You are an absolute gem :-) I love you for reviewing every chapter. And your run-on sentence is about the best summary I've seen yet of Snape's feelings for Harry in my story, so don't apologize for it. :)
Ah! No! Poor Harry, what's wrong?
Great chapter! I loved how Snape was preparing to leave after he told Harry that he had worth, but then he couldn't. Haha!
Title: Things Unspoken
| 20 Aug 2007 9:37 am
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Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Ahhh! Cliffhanger... Poor Harry, he fainted....
Title: Things Unspoken
| 19 Aug 2007 9:14 pm
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Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter and how Shape trys to help Harry. Still Shape is himself but then is still a soft part of him that he is feeling for Harry
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