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Title: Epilogue: Restoration 23 Dec 2008 9:35 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    This SOOOO needs a sequal!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 15 Aug 2008 2:11 am
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey!
    This was beautiful... really wonderful. You got Snape down to be completely in character with him rough handling Harry at the beginning and thinking the worse of the boy-who-lived, until he is undeniable shown different. And even then he tries, as hard as possible, to find Harry at fault. Of course, he doesn't succeed.
    Harry was written brilliantly, too. Mortified that someone could find out. Terrified that it is Snape who did. Frightened of what would come of it. And hoping beyond belief that all could be forgotten, that Snape just wouldn't care and he could go back to living as he always has.

    Dumbledore was wonderful, too. Caring, angry, appalled that he did never suspect such abuse. But nevertheless calm and in control of the situation. You got him down terrifically.

    The whole story was logical, not too fast paced, but not too slow either, wonderfully emotionally written and a terrific read.

    Thanks a lot for this and, if you're really thinking about it, I'd very much like a sequel. I'm immediately going to take a look at your profile to find out if you've already started one.

    Thanks once again and keep writing and having fun playing with the characters,
    ai
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 30 Jul 2008 11:05 am
Reviewer: Morrolan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 21 May 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: EvilDime (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi!
    I just read this fic again and noticed I haven't reviewed it yet. Horror! So here it is: my review. ;D
    This is one brilliant fic! I love your conflicted Severus and totally stunned (at least at first) Harry. Just so cool! ^^
    The meeting with Dursley was something else, and Snape giving Harry that toy soldier was just... awwww. ; )
    Wonderful work!
    Hugs,
    Dime
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 13 Apr 2008 12:55 am
Reviewer: Fabio P.Barbieri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A beautiful job - psychologically credible, canonical, affecting, powerful and taut.

    Author's Response: Er, thanks. In the interests of full disclosure I should point out that we know each other. You'll find enough info in my profile to figure it out.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 27 Mar 2008 5:08 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful story! Off to the next section!!!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 03 Feb 2008 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 10 Jan 2008 5:27 am
Reviewer: wrappedinharry (Signed) [Report This]
    Very, very enjoyable story.

    Thank you for sharing it. I love your writing style. It is so nice to read a fanfic written by someone with such a command of the English language.

    Thanks for sharing.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 31 Dec 2007 6:20 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Well done. I am impressed with how well you kept Snape in character through this story.

    At first I was a little let-down that Snape let Vernon get off so easily, but then reminded myself that it's not over yet. Vernon still has to "survive" the summer with whomever the Order sends. Big smiles on that!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 02 Dec 2007 4:41 am
Reviewer: supergirl_3684 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! any thoughts to a sequal?

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