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Title: Epilogue: Restoration 22 Nov 2007 11:11 am
Reviewer: Sevvus_Harry (Signed) [Report This]
    This is good. Short and sweet. Not much dwelling on his woes, but perhaps you could actually emphasize more on scaring Dursley. Of course, it would be nice if Snape had to help Harry because of his injuries...
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 20 Oct 2007 6:56 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    *Laughs* What a great story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! >< hahaha *big grin*
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 17 Sep 2007 10:50 am
Reviewer: LizBee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I do like the symbolism of the broken soldier. Your brain is so delicious and squishy. *licks it*
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 09 Sep 2007 7:26 am
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very satisfying ending to the story, as long as I know there is a sequel in the works - otherwise, I would be sad to see it is ended. To be honest, I would love one that followed Harry all the way to adulthood... with Snape as his friend/mentor/protector. Slash or father-figure, either way it goes, this was a wonderful fic in its own right!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 02 Sep 2007 4:30 pm
Reviewer: Karen Wood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was super, you have just caught Snape and Dumbledore perfectly. Thank you
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 30 Aug 2007 7:02 am
Reviewer: madbrad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was an excellent little story; written so very well! A straightforward plot, but you gleaned a lot from it - sympathy for Harry, respect for Snape, more understanding for Dumbledore. And I loved this epilogue with his friends.

    I found this story via a recent recommendation in a Yahoo newsgroup, which stated that 'Branwyn is the queen of Luna stories', something along those lines. I love a well-done Luna (which is rare), and noted that you seemed to pair her up - ever so lightly - with Harry here.

    I've just joined potionsandsnitches.net, but it's a Harry and Snape biased fanfic site, I think. If you have other stories - particularly H/L stories - elsewhere, I'd appreciate your letting me know. My e-mail address should be accessible in my profile here (I'm 'madbrad'). I'm off to look at yours now anyway.

    Great little story, thanks!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 29 Aug 2007 10:05 am
Reviewer: Eurothrashed (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this story. From beginning to end everyone was in character and your vocabulary was very, very refreshing. I'm favouriting this.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 28 Aug 2007 8:01 am
Reviewer: Kirby Lane (Signed) [Report This]
    Dear Branwyn,

    I am compelled to convey my appreciation of your story and to relate that your compendious prose has convinced me of your exceptional proficiency in the art of storytelling. :)

    So therefore, I am sharing with you...CHOCOLATE! By the pound! For YOU!!!! Because I LOVE that reviews are like chocolate, don't you?!?! :) :)

    Good chapter - I loved the letter! It was so incredibly great how Snape could be so clever and insulting and caring and insufferably smart all at once. :) I can't wait to see what Harry comes up with... (Dare i admit that I stole a glance at the next story already? But I haven't read more than the first couple paragraphs because I forced myself to come back and finish this last chapter first, even though I desperately want to know what happens!)

    So here I go... :)

    Author's Response:

    *huge idiotic grin*

     

    You absolutely make my day, you know that? 

Title: Epilogue: Restoration 26 Aug 2007 10:39 pm
Reviewer: Anne Squires (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just finished reading this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 26 Aug 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) [Report This]
    Arg stupid idiot of a thing cut off my review - anyway I just wanted to mention that I am dying to know what Snape's reaction is (because I just know he was waiting anxiously beside Harry's bed the entire time he was out - or maybe that's just the fangirl in me XD) and hopefully I'll read about it at some point in the sequel, except I'll save it for when I've had a decent sleep and an injection of caffeine XD

    You really are a very fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more.

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