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Title: Reticence 06 Jul 2007 7:55 am
Reviewer: TrustSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a marvelous chapter. Thank you for sharing your story. I am enjoying it very much.
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 10:58 pm
Reviewer: Pan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome. I love the perspective.
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 7:13 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow...Hope you can update soon. (Although you just updated. ^-^)
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 6:44 pm
Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    YAY!!! Another chapter, thank you for updating so fast!

    I like the part where Dumbledore tells Snape: you can growl where you think is appropriate. And I can just imagine Severus's fierce growl quickly go over his features...

    Update soon!!! I am eager to see what happens to Harry next!
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 4:33 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    *chills*

    You have characterized everyone so perfectly. I love this story!
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 3:04 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! Well, Snape's level of restraint was incredible. I have to wonder about Dumbledore leaving the scene - was it only to give Severus the oppportunity, or was he also restraining himself, or tending to something else?? That went far more peaceably than Vernon deserves...or Petunia and Dudley, though their action was less. Hopefully, before the end, they will see far more in the way of retribution - perhaps, feeling all the injuries and psychic damage they caused to Harry, with sure knowledge that it is all their own fault, not his?! I do very much hope that Severus will be the wizard there to see to Harry's safety while staying with the Dursleys. Hmm, really, thought Petunia is Lily's sister, thus of her blood, Vernon is not, and Dudley less than Petunia.
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 2:07 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow always knew that Snape was intimadating but that was really scarry. Somehow I want him to have to spend some time at Surrey with Harry because that would be hilarious.
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 1:46 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    this story just gets better and better, i swear....
Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 10:11 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    What did Snape want the toy soldier for? Hmm.. :) Great chapter! I'm glad that Snape didn't kill Vernon Dursley, but does Harry really need him? He needs his aunt, she's the one he's related to. Marvelous writing. Everything about all of the characters is so real and interesting. terrific job on the story and thank you for all the timely updates!

    Author's Response:

    Well, I figure that Snape and Dumbledore both realize that if they do any lasting harm to Vernon, Petunia will chuck Harry out, threats or no, so by those means Vernon is necessary to Harry's safety.

     

    As to the toy soldier---well. You'll see. :-) 

Title: Making Amends 05 Jul 2007 6:43 am
Reviewer: Dino1Draco (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, I am so happy you updated so soon. Can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.

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