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Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! I loved the conversation between the two. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 1:53 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the fact, that Snape didn't keep his promise and *told* Dumbles. It just seems so seemless with the Snape character... I think you've hit Snape's characterisation dead centre. Enjoying this fic very much. : )
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 11:50 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Whoo! Nice buildup! I enjoyed the conversation between Snape and Dumbledore. Very in character, and still entertaining, even though it was just a chapter of a discussion. Good job!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 8:46 am
Reviewer: Dawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story. I just want to point out something I noted while reading this chapter. At the beginning it states that Dumbledore and Snape will apparate from the pub, but at the end of the chapter they floo. It is hardly a big deal, since people naturally change their minds. But I thought I'd point it out just in case it mattered to you. Apart from that the story has been brilliant to read so far and I hope you continue until its conclusion.

    Author's Response:

    Argh! I meant to change that----originally they were going to apparate, but then I decided to give them time to talk. I thought I'd caught all the earlier apparition references. Thank you for pointing it out!

     

Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 7:28 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter! I'm sooo looking forward to reading what happens next!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    EXCELLENT characterization of Snape.

    This line in particular had me laughing:

    "When Potter breaks rules from now on, I am not to punish him. I am to serve him biscuits and butterbeer and ask how his day has gone."

    So perfectly Snape!
Title: A Conversation 04 Jul 2007 7:11 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the talks between Snape and Dumbledore. You did that very well.
Title: Confession and Absolution 30 Jun 2007 8:06 pm
Reviewer: Rhea (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this story very much and look forward for a new chapter!
Title: Confession and Absolution 29 Jun 2007 8:39 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter.
Title: Reticence 29 Jun 2007 8:28 pm
Reviewer: celestialuna (Signed) [Report This]
    poor harry.

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