NOOOOOOO UPDATE!!!!!
I love this story, and I've only read this chapter. I love the use of the present tense here, and the characterisations were so spot on. Finally a fic where Harry is not a whimpering coward and Snape does not become instantly kind and caring and sappy. I love this, trully. I'm so glad I've just found it. Amazing. Please update soon.
Snape smiled?!? Ahhh! IS the world ending??
Great chapter! God, I hope Snape and Dumbledore tear the Dursleys to pieces...or hex them...or something...lol. This story is so well-written. I love it :)
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Whooo! loved it! Oh, so great. Everyone was so wonderfully in charcter, Dumbledore most of all. Fantastic job on him. I love the ending too- how they're going to go, how Snape wants to. And the hint Dumbledore gives us over the "keeper" remark. Lovely. Thank you so much for the update! :)
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous)
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That was interesting. Hope theres some hexing in the next one!
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:16 pm
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| Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous)
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Ahh... Snape meets the Dursleys! I can't wait to see what's going to happen!
Good chapter... Poor Harry, he's been through so much.
Well can't wait for the next update!!!
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 10:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Fabulous! I love this chapter - I think you've gotten Dumbledore just right! I love it!
| Title: Confession and Absolution
| 28 Jun 2007 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Heather (Anonymous)
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Excellent! This is very well written. The only thing that kind of pulls me out of the story is the present tense. "Potter nods" instead of "Potter nodded" "Dumbledore says" instead of "Dumbledore said" Other than that I think it is very refreshing and I can't wait for another chapter!
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