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Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Extremely satisfying chapter. The last lines were especially satisfying. I've always hated TV shows where misunderstandings and keeping secrets are the main focus of the show. By that I mean shows like Gilligan's Island (yes, I'm in my 40s) where every episode is based on a misunderstanding. Many fan fictions are like that too, when Harry tries to hide what his life is like at the Dursley's and the story is about someone getting close to finding out then missing the boat. That's frustrating in the extreme. Your story is much more interesting in that the problem is seen, dealth with by one, who sends it to a higher power, who takes care of it well. Congratulations on doing a wonderful job with this!
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 8:01 pm
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like the way you did Dumbledore. Finally! Someone writes this kind of story and has Dumbledore respond the way I think canon Dumbledore would respond. And your Dumbledore's voice is very IC. You really have gotten all the voices just right.
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Cora (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi, great story! I see a lot of potential here, so I'd be sorry if it's just a short one. Please, think again!
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 6:30 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh please write the scene with Albus and Snape is Surrey.
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 5:57 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! again. I reviewed on FF.net before I realized your story was posted here too, so I thought I'd tell you one more time how awesome this story is. Your writing is phenominal (I think I spelled that wrong). I've already added it to my C2 on ff.net (Severus Snape Fanfiction- real orginal title huh?) and I'm eagerly looking forward to an update.
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Lynx_lw (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH well this story seems very promising!
    keep writing, i `ll be look` fordward for the next update =)
Title: Confession and Absolution 28 Jun 2007 4:31 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I love Dumbledore's reaction and how he handled the situation! Usually I hate the old coot... but you have made my heart a little soft for him again.

    Author's Response: Dumbledore is probably my favorite character so if I've swayed you a little more to his cause I am very pleased. :)
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 2:46 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful. i think maybe one of the most realistic reactions from harry that i've seen in a fic like this.
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 9:22 am
Reviewer: Spiorad (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I absolutly LOVE this so far! It has a very nice twist already and I cant wait tos see what happens. Please upate soon!
Title: Reticence 28 Jun 2007 9:07 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yay! Snape got Dumbledore. Good for him! This chapter was really realistic and though a similar scenario has been played out in other fics(with varying degrees of believability), I'm always disappointed when Snape agrees to keep silent about Harry's home life. It just isn't something a teacher would do. It's great that you updated so quickly. I hope you continue to do the same. I'm really looking foward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so pleased you think so. That's part of why I decided to take this scenario on, even though it's been done to death---I never found a telling of it that really satisfied my notions of what Snape would really do in that situation.

    I hope to update once a day until the story is finished. I hope. :-)


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