Oh no fair you can't leave it there! This is just to big a cliffy, we want another chapter please.
| Title: Reticence
| 28 Jun 2007 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: AllyKat (Anonymous)
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Thanks for changing the name, I thought I had already read this one until I really got into it. The present tense is a little weird though, but I guess it will work if you keep it consistent.
| Title: Reticence
| 28 Jun 2007 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Love it! Great story, I love the way you deal with Snape's emotions and reactions to Harry. Nice take on the usual scenario/plotline, I've really enjoyed reading it!
I love it. Fantastic. I love how Snape's mature enough to go back on his promise, cancelling their bargain. Harry really isn't senseful (if that's even a word) and I love how rational snape is being in all of this. I can't wait to see when Dumbledore finds out. This seems to be the most realistic and in character portrayal of the situation that I have ever seen. Great job. Hopefully we'll get an update soon!
Excellent--my favorite chapter so far, and they've all been good :)
| Title: Reticence
| 27 Jun 2007 10:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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Brilliant chapter! Update again soon! Please!!! I wonder who is right about the headmaster!
That was a great chapter, it's nice to see Severus being so caring, even if he is doing it on his own special way. I'm glad he's not going to let Harry get away without getting the help he needs and the punishment the Dursleys deserve. Looking forward to Albus' reaction. Keep up the great work, and update soon. LES
Nooo you are evil for that cliffy! Wonderful chapter, keep up the fantastic work you have me hooked!
Skittles and chocolate frogs!
Wow! Great story so far. I absolutley felt both Harry's despair and Snape's complete uncertainty in dealing with this. You are an excellent writer (and hopefully a frequent updater). Thanks for sharing.
Wow! Great story so far. I absolutley felt both Harry's despair and Snape's complete uncertainty in dealing with this. You are an excellent writer (and hopefully a frequent updater). Thanks for sharing.
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