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Title: A Conversation 18 Mar 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: ash_blackthorn (Signed) [Report This]
    "I don't care if the boy's great conquering power over the Dark Lord consists of snogging him to death"

    This needs to be written into a fic.
    The image of a horrified Voldie being unwillingly snogged to death is priceless.
Title: Making Amends 04 Mar 2009 5:54 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Bravo! I loved this! And such restraint on Severus' part! Admirable indeed. (Got used to the present tense!)
Title: Reticence 04 Mar 2009 5:30 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, this is GOOD STUFF so far! I've got to get used to the present tense, though...
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 01 Feb 2009 1:46 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, I just wanted to tell you once again that I adore this fic. Everyone is perfectly in character. You captured Snape's essense, Hermione's nuances, Luna's oddities, Ron's temper, and most importantly in my mind the intricacies of Dumbledore's dialgoue. Finally, someone who can write an adult who sounds like an adult. This is by far the most in character story I have ever read. Great, great job.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 25 Dec 2008 12:06 am
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    I've read this story a few times, but I just wanted to review again to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Snape's characterization is perfect (because I hate stories that have him using such simple language, when he really is the type of man to use large words.) I absolutely adore every line of this story, and it is one of the best Snape discovers Harry is abused stories in exsistance.
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 23 Dec 2008 9:35 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    This SOOOO needs a sequal!
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 15 Aug 2008 2:11 am
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey!
    This was beautiful... really wonderful. You got Snape down to be completely in character with him rough handling Harry at the beginning and thinking the worse of the boy-who-lived, until he is undeniable shown different. And even then he tries, as hard as possible, to find Harry at fault. Of course, he doesn't succeed.
    Harry was written brilliantly, too. Mortified that someone could find out. Terrified that it is Snape who did. Frightened of what would come of it. And hoping beyond belief that all could be forgotten, that Snape just wouldn't care and he could go back to living as he always has.

    Dumbledore was wonderful, too. Caring, angry, appalled that he did never suspect such abuse. But nevertheless calm and in control of the situation. You got him down terrifically.

    The whole story was logical, not too fast paced, but not too slow either, wonderfully emotionally written and a terrific read.

    Thanks a lot for this and, if you're really thinking about it, I'd very much like a sequel. I'm immediately going to take a look at your profile to find out if you've already started one.

    Thanks once again and keep writing and having fun playing with the characters,
    ai
Title: Epilogue: Restoration 30 Jul 2008 11:05 am
Reviewer: Morrolan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this.
Title: Observation and Reflection 01 Jul 2008 11:31 pm
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your use of present-tense is a bit disconcerting. Most fiction is written in past-tense.

    Author's Response:

    You're kidding. I had no idea. Let me go change my entire story now that you've pointed out that I've deviated from the standard form.

     

    ;-)

Title: Epilogue: Restoration 21 May 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: EvilDime (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi!
    I just read this fic again and noticed I haven't reviewed it yet. Horror! So here it is: my review. ;D
    This is one brilliant fic! I love your conflicted Severus and totally stunned (at least at first) Harry. Just so cool! ^^
    The meeting with Dursley was something else, and Snape giving Harry that toy soldier was just... awwww. ; )
    Wonderful work!
    Hugs,
    Dime

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