Hi there, I think I like your story quite well so far and the prospect of Harry hopefully becoming Snape's apprentice makes me bounce in delightful anticipation. ^^
Anyway, one question: Was Snape injured and I didn't get it or is he is just resting in the hospital wing?
Your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 2: All aside in desperation
| 12 Jul 2007 5:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Smelly Cat (Anonymous)
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Yep, That was better than the first chapter!! I want more Snape and Harry like this chapter had in it. I like how you changed some stuff.
Thanks !
Smelly Cat
Author's Response: Nothing beats a bad tempered Snape and a restless Harry.
| Title: Chapter 2: All aside in desperation
| 29 Jun 2007 1:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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Hehee, cool chapter. Snape is a git from beginning to end, front to back, and top to bottom. I don't think he can help it and probably doesn't want to. But you gave him a glimmer of a heart here. I can't wait to see if it develops. 10 points. THE GIT!
Author's Response: I know you shouldn't laugh at your own jokes, but that bit still cracks me up too. ;)
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