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Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 27 Jun 2008 8:56 pm
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It should be tough, not tuff. There are also other minor errors, such as where instead of were, to instead of so, and other things that appear to be the result of relying on spell-checking software to correct typographical errors. These do not detract from your well-developed plot and characterization, but they are distracting.
Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 30 Jun 2007 9:37 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. What's going on at the end, though? Is it just Snape grabbing his shoulder or someone more nefarious? Did I just say that? About Snape? I do need a theme park, I think.

    Author's Response: *chuckles* yeah. . . I don't think you can get much scarier than Snape.
Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 30 Jun 2007 1:59 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Absolutely love it, that was a great chapter. It's nice to see Severus helping Harry with potions even if he is his own snarky self while teaching him. I happen to like the fact that Severus challenges him and makes him think about what he's making. Intresting cliffhanger, can't wait to see what's going on. Keep up the great work and update soon. LES

    Author's Response:

    I'm a sucker for the 'everyone thinks he's heartless, but he shows a sliver of his softer side to me, and only me, every now and again' kind of guy. ^^"

    I don't want to change Sevvy's character too much, I mean, is dark and snarky personna is why we all love him, right? ^^

    Tee hee, I owe Alan Rickman so much xXx

Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 29 Jun 2007 9:19 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm. Now I have to wonder: Did Harry's relatives hire him out to some kind of experimental lab, in exchange for money? They obviously don't care for him, and would allow things to be done to a child that no decent person would, and there are labs that look to do questionable research... And then, a bit seems to be again reflecting on Voldie & DE's. But the end of the chapter - Not a dream? Hmm. More soon?

    Author's Response:

    *Laughs heartily*  You're set on working this out before I write it aren't you? ^^  Well done you.  But I won't say whether you're right or not just yet O_~

    There are two more chapters written that I shall be posting soon. xX

Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 29 Jun 2007 4:17 pm
Reviewer: Emma Lipardi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gah! Poor Harry!

    Sorry, just read this through in one go and I needed to vent a little. This is so good. I can see Snape coming around, but it is extremely slow (not that I'm complaining!).

    What did those Muggles do to him? I demand retribution on Harry's behalf. Have Snape make it painful and lasting. Harry's blocked it out, whatever it is.

    I can't wait to see more. I think I might camp out in front of the computer.

    Emma

    Author's Response:

    I like camping ^^

    Snape likes being like that I guess.  It's strange really. . . I have the story and the plot all in my head, but the way I write it out is almost decided for me by the characters I write about.

    Very strange. . .

     As for the muggles, well. . .  We'll see ;p


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