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Title: Chapter 9: The Nightmare 13 Oct 2007 11:01 am
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You have a good story started, but it'd be a lot better if you had a beta reader help you with your grammar, spelling and punctuation. Your story has a lot of errors in it, and it does detract from the story.

    Author's Response: Heh ^^;; Sorry about that.  Most of my earlier chapters need to be edited but I'm planning on writting my whole story first and then going back and getting the ones I've missed.  Thanks hun xX
Title: Chapter 9: The Nightmare 25 Jul 2007 12:02 am
Reviewer: mayatrau (Signed) [Report This]
    wow... hope u update soon...

    Author's Response:

    Aye aye mame! I'll get right on it ^-^

    Thanks for the review xX

Title: Chapter 9: The Nightmare 19 Jul 2007 7:08 am
Reviewer: Irene (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I will never understand this obsession you writers have with torturing your innocent, beloved readers.

    The evil laughter? I admit, I can sympathize, seeing as I use it quite often myself, but the endless cliffies?

    I guess it's just one of the many inner secrets that a fanfiction writer holds, then?

    Hmmmmmmm....

    Anyways, lovely confusing chapter. Can't wait for some sort of antidote to the confusion...a new chapter, maybe? *big hopeful eyes*

    Author's Response:

    I was going to end this chapter at "I can never expect anything but dissapointment" or whatever I wrote. . . . O_O"  But then the chapter looked too short so I kept on going ^-^

    I'll work on the next chapter for you.  This next one will have my favourite little secret in it! ^-^  Tee hee

Title: Chapter 9: The Nightmare 18 Jul 2007 3:31 am
Reviewer: enildam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AHHH!!!! Please update soon! brilliant fiction... i hope that snape rescues harry soon!

    Author's Response:

    Will Snape rescue Harry? Who's gonna rescue Snape?  What will become of the two?  ^-^  Tee hee.

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review. xX

Title: Chapter 9: The Nightmare 17 Jul 2007 11:34 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap! Hope you can update soon!

    Author's Response: I was a bit worried about this chapter and how it would read through, so thank you for your review. ^^

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