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Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky for some 18 Sep 2007 4:13 am
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I had just read your story and is excite to read more

    Author's Response: Cheerful ^-^  I'll do my best. Xx
Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky for some 15 Sep 2007 2:01 pm
Reviewer: honore (Anonymous) [Report This]
    2) Bad luck. In England it is considered bad luck to see a single Magpie. To see two together is good luck. Does that stand in America or any other countries? No, not here, however, we have other equally odd ideas. Loved this bit as usual- feeling bad or not- an excellent job. Well done! Looking forward to more. Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Thank thee kindly ^-^

    I'm feeling better now so hopefully I'll have tiem to write the next chapter soon. (I say 'hopefully' because I've just started Uni this week and have to enroll. . . find class rooms. . . do 1st project that has no meaning or real value . . . etc etc. . .)

Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky for some 15 Sep 2007 3:25 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry it took to long for me to review, but with all the rain we got lately down here in sunny Florida my internet connection has been doing strange things. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad Harry is almost back to normal. Thanks for putting in the unknown point of view too. I made things very interesting.

    I can't wait for your next update.

    I feel like I'm forgetting to mention something, but I can't think of it know. I'll let you know latter.

    Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    My headache has gone! *Woot*

    Thanks for the suggestion hun ^-^

    Forgetting something? Ah well.  If it's not worth remembering then it's not important. (Like cleaning my room for instance . . .)

     

    Lol xXx

Title: Chapter 13: Unlucky for some 14 Sep 2007 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Twinheart (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great story! I love your writing style and originality!

    One quick grammar note: I’ve noticed that all through this story you have used ‘where’ when you should have used ‘were’. ‘Where’ refers to a place - as in: “Tell us where the Potter boy is. . .”

    ‘Were’ is the past plural of ‘to be’…as in “Settling down for the night Severus wondered how far away they were (not where)from any kind of civilization….”
    Or in: “Lifting himself off the ground took a tremendous amount of effort, more so because of the fact that his clothes were(not where) heavy and waterlogged ….” I thought at first it was a typo, but since it’s evident throughout all thirteen chapters, I thought I should mention it.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Ah.  Sorry about that ^^;; I guess I missed some of them.  Thank you for letting me know though. <3

     

    I'm glad you're enjoying the story otherwise, thanks for the review. xXx ^v^


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