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Reviews For What is family?
Author's Response: Cheerful ^-^ I'll do my best. Xx
Author's Response: Thank thee kindly ^-^ I'm feeling better now so hopefully I'll have tiem to write the next chapter soon. (I say 'hopefully' because I've just started Uni this week and have to enroll. . . find class rooms. . . do 1st project that has no meaning or real value . . . etc etc. . .)
I can't wait for your next update. I feel like I'm forgetting to mention something, but I can't think of it know. I'll let you know latter. Please update soon. Author's Response: My headache has gone! *Woot* Thanks for the suggestion hun ^-^ Forgetting something? Ah well. If it's not worth remembering then it's not important. (Like cleaning my room for instance . . .)
Lol xXx
One quick grammar note: I’ve noticed that all through this story you have used ‘where’ when you should have used ‘were’. ‘Where’ refers to a place - as in: “Tell us where the Potter boy is. . .” ‘Were’ is the past plural of ‘to be’…as in “Settling down for the night Severus wondered how far away they were (not where)from any kind of civilization….” Or in: “Lifting himself off the ground took a tremendous amount of effort, more so because of the fact that his clothes were(not where) heavy and waterlogged ….” I thought at first it was a typo, but since it’s evident throughout all thirteen chapters, I thought I should mention it. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Ah. Sorry about that ^^;; I guess I missed some of them. Thank you for letting me know though. <3
I'm glad you're enjoying the story otherwise, thanks for the review. xXx ^v^ |
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