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Reviews For What is family?
This story is amazing. You have such creative and original ideas, they are really entertaining to read. I love the humor, Snape's thought cracked me up! lol. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon! *puppy dog eyes* As for Halloween, I have given this some thought, and I have concluded that I don't think Wizarding children would dress up for Halloween. They would enjoy the mischief and the festivities, but I just think that dressing up would be over rated. You see, in our world, vampires, werewolves, unicorns and the lot are all fantasy creatures, whereas for them they are all normal creatures of there world, as common as say cats and dogs, ya dig? That's just MY thoughts on the matter though… If you are determined for them to dress up though, I think Hermione would dress up as someone she looks up to that was important to the community, Ron would do someone famous and exciting, and Harry would want to do something common, so he doesn’t stand out the most. He can hide in the crowd! I really hope you update soon, Ttyl Beth Author's Response: Thank thee kindly chuckyhun ^v^ Hmm, maybe you have a pont about Halloween. I know that I could come up with reasons for dressing them up (ie - Hermione/Sirius drags them off to the Muggle world, or, it is a sign of respect to the different species or something) but I have had another idea for Halloween given to me from someone over on ff which might work a whole lot better. ^-^ But thanks so much for the input hun xXx It's really difficult to know where to take a story if people don't tell me what they think so you opinion was very much appretiated. <3 Thanks again, Amy P.S: what does 'ttyl' mean? O_o
On another note I got this really strange idea. In the last chapter, or the one before I can't remember right now, you had what I'm assuming to be Tobias questioning something about tracking. I at first thought that he was tracking Harry, but as I thought about it, Severus was knocked unconsious when they first arrived at the compound and Tobias could have implanted some sort of tracking device in him. Just an idea, I thought I'd share. Don't know why, just seemed... Anyway I'm going to abruptly end my rambling. Good chapter and update soon. Author's Response: Ooo. So close, so close. But no prizes for you I'm afraid. ^-^ Please come again. <3 What's wrong with Snape. I give you a hint - - in the next chapter. ^-^ Lol xXx |
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