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Reviews For What is family?
Author's Response: Heh ^^;; Sorry about that. Most of my earlier chapters need to be edited but I'm planning on writting my whole story first and then going back and getting the ones I've missed. Thanks hun xX
Author's Response: Blast! She did the puppy dog look! >_< How do I resist that? Yes! Severus will be in the next chapter, causing trouble and being mean and winding Sirius up. Heh heh heh. Thanks for the review and free advertisment! ^v^ <3
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter, and while I'm glad Sirius and Harry are getting along so well, and those scenes were really cute, I want Harry to become Severus's ward. Good chapter, as always, please update soon. Granted you update more frequently than me, so I really shouldn't talk, but...*shrugs*. On another note, do you plan on updateing your potions and snitches story soon? Please? Okay, I'm stopping now really. Great chapter. Update soon. Author's Response: What??? =_=;;; I'm not a big fan of pain.... It tends to hurt, y'know? And he was in it!!! He was right there!! (everyone else: "where?" Me: "Right there!!" *point to 3 sentences in whole chapter* Everyone else: T_T) Sirius and Harry will be close I'm afraid ^-^ but don't worry, Severus will play a stronger role in my story - I just need Sirius for a while now until I can put him and Sev in a room together. *evil grin* I LOVE fanfics ^v^ You're really think hard about my plat line aren't you? I'm gonna stop giving you hints now. ^_^;;; Potions and Snitches? Yeah, I keep telling myself off for that btu yes. The next chapter will be Snape 'visiting' the Dursleys. See! *points* I've just commited myself to it! Now I have to write it! *inner thoughts: "Damn you!" Outer thoughts: "Well you shouldn't have taken so long!"* Lol Xx
Author's Response: Thank you ^-^ and I like your Username. It's sweet. ^-^
This story is amazing. You have such creative and original ideas, they are really entertaining to read. I love the humor, Snape's thought cracked me up! lol. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon! *puppy dog eyes* As for Halloween, I have given this some thought, and I have concluded that I don't think Wizarding children would dress up for Halloween. They would enjoy the mischief and the festivities, but I just think that dressing up would be over rated. You see, in our world, vampires, werewolves, unicorns and the lot are all fantasy creatures, whereas for them they are all normal creatures of there world, as common as say cats and dogs, ya dig? That's just MY thoughts on the matter though… If you are determined for them to dress up though, I think Hermione would dress up as someone she looks up to that was important to the community, Ron would do someone famous and exciting, and Harry would want to do something common, so he doesn’t stand out the most. He can hide in the crowd! I really hope you update soon, Ttyl Beth Author's Response: Thank thee kindly chuckyhun ^v^ Hmm, maybe you have a pont about Halloween. I know that I could come up with reasons for dressing them up (ie - Hermione/Sirius drags them off to the Muggle world, or, it is a sign of respect to the different species or something) but I have had another idea for Halloween given to me from someone over on ff which might work a whole lot better. ^-^ But thanks so much for the input hun xXx It's really difficult to know where to take a story if people don't tell me what they think so you opinion was very much appretiated. <3 Thanks again, Amy P.S: what does 'ttyl' mean? O_o
On another note I got this really strange idea. In the last chapter, or the one before I can't remember right now, you had what I'm assuming to be Tobias questioning something about tracking. I at first thought that he was tracking Harry, but as I thought about it, Severus was knocked unconsious when they first arrived at the compound and Tobias could have implanted some sort of tracking device in him. Just an idea, I thought I'd share. Don't know why, just seemed... Anyway I'm going to abruptly end my rambling. Good chapter and update soon. Author's Response: Ooo. So close, so close. But no prizes for you I'm afraid. ^-^ Please come again. <3 What's wrong with Snape. I give you a hint - - in the next chapter. ^-^ Lol xXx
Author's Response: Gonna torture him some more yet *evul laugh* LoL X
Author's Response: <3 I let you off, but just this once. *wags finger jokingly) Lol xXx
Now, I really want to know. What's going to happen to Snape's father? The suspence is killing me. I did enjoy the last scene when Dumbledore found Snape and Harry. I could feel the tension before Dumbbledore presented Snape his wand. Can't wait to see what happens next. Feel better. Update soon. Don't forget about your other story. And feel better. DaugherOfAres Author's Response: Tobias shall be delt with, but for the moment I kinda need him. Y'know. . . to. . . torture and. . . stuff. . . c_c;; I'm starting to feel better, thanks hun ^-^ your so sweet <3 Sorry that you cought it. Maybe it was a computer bug or something? ^v^
Author's Response: Cheerful ^-^ I'll do my best. Xx |
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