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Reviews For What is family?
Author's Response: Thank thee kindly ^-^ I'm feeling better now so hopefully I'll have tiem to write the next chapter soon. (I say 'hopefully' because I've just started Uni this week and have to enroll. . . find class rooms. . . do 1st project that has no meaning or real value . . . etc etc. . .)
I can't wait for your next update. I feel like I'm forgetting to mention something, but I can't think of it know. I'll let you know latter. Please update soon. Author's Response: My headache has gone! *Woot* Thanks for the suggestion hun ^-^ Forgetting something? Ah well. If it's not worth remembering then it's not important. (Like cleaning my room for instance . . .)
Lol xXx
One quick grammar note: I’ve noticed that all through this story you have used ‘where’ when you should have used ‘were’. ‘Where’ refers to a place - as in: “Tell us where the Potter boy is. . .” ‘Were’ is the past plural of ‘to be’…as in “Settling down for the night Severus wondered how far away they were (not where)from any kind of civilization….” Or in: “Lifting himself off the ground took a tremendous amount of effort, more so because of the fact that his clothes were(not where) heavy and waterlogged ….” I thought at first it was a typo, but since it’s evident throughout all thirteen chapters, I thought I should mention it. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Ah. Sorry about that ^^;; I guess I missed some of them. Thank you for letting me know though. <3
I'm glad you're enjoying the story otherwise, thanks for the review. xXx ^v^
Author's Response: *Backs away from the glare* I have to end the chapters somewhere ^^;;;; I'd love to torture and kill the man for you, but I kinda need him for the story at the minute ^-^;;; Tell you what, you can have him after I've finished with him. How's that? Thanks chuckyhun ^-^ xXx
Author's Response: *laughs* Don't worry. He won't stay liek that forever. ^-^
Author's Response: Heh heh heh. ^-^ After what I'm putting poor Harry through I think it may be fair to say that I have my own sadistic streak too. As for whether or not Tobias Snape will feel its wrath. . . nmeh. Guess you'll all just have to wait and see. ^-^ Thanks for the review chuckyhun xXx ^v^
You don't have to post authors notes within the chapter though, warning about the gore and such. A warning at the top is sufficient. Authors notes in the chapter jar the readers. It doesn't work well. Author's Response: Sorry, I meant to get rid of those . . . I'll drop them though. They're annoying to write too. (only put them there for the really scweamish readers, but I don't think there are any) Thank thee hun! Love you too! xXxXx
Author's Response: O_o . . . There's a sadistic side to you isn't there? . . . ^^;;; Thank you hun! Love you much! XxXx
Author's Response: Aye aye mame! I'll get right on it ^-^ Thanks for the review xX
The evil laughter? I admit, I can sympathize, seeing as I use it quite often myself, but the endless cliffies? I guess it's just one of the many inner secrets that a fanfiction writer holds, then? Hmmmmmmm.... Anyways, lovely confusing chapter. Can't wait for some sort of antidote to the confusion...a new chapter, maybe? *big hopeful eyes* Author's Response: I was going to end this chapter at "I can never expect anything but dissapointment" or whatever I wrote. . . . O_O" But then the chapter looked too short so I kept on going ^-^ I'll work on the next chapter for you. This next one will have my favourite little secret in it! ^-^ Tee hee |
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