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Title: Chapter 4: Snakes and lions 29 Jun 2007 8:51 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    This is getting interesting. Harry has been raised in incredible abusive neglect - he has not faith or trust when it comes down to it, in adult / authority, and no wonder, given his relatives! Yes, he has had some positive experiences more recently, but it really is a case of too little, too late. I have always wondered how DUmbledore could have left Harry with the Dursleys.

    Author's Response:

    Hmm. . .

    I won't write the comment I was gonna for fear of giving the plot away but, . . .

     ^^ I think 'neglect' would have been better in Harry's case this time round.

Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected 29 Jun 2007 8:50 pm
Reviewer: xikum (Signed) [Report This]
    Now, that just opens up a can of worms, doesn't it? So, it was not Snape's memory, given the surprise. Was it something Harry had repressed, from his mental encounters of Voldie? I always wondered about the dreams he had that were actually visions, how he seemed to forget them, or decide not to tell anyone about them...

    Author's Response:

    There is a definate reason why Harry can't remember.

    Well actually there are two at the minute. . .  But as soon as I figure out which one it is I'll let you know! ^^;

Title: Chapter 6: In the darkness (part 1) 29 Jun 2007 4:17 pm
Reviewer: Emma Lipardi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gah! Poor Harry!

    Sorry, just read this through in one go and I needed to vent a little. This is so good. I can see Snape coming around, but it is extremely slow (not that I'm complaining!).

    What did those Muggles do to him? I demand retribution on Harry's behalf. Have Snape make it painful and lasting. Harry's blocked it out, whatever it is.

    I can't wait to see more. I think I might camp out in front of the computer.

    Emma

    Author's Response:

    I like camping ^^

    Snape likes being like that I guess.  It's strange really. . . I have the story and the plot all in my head, but the way I write it out is almost decided for me by the characters I write about.

    Very strange. . .

     As for the muggles, well. . .  We'll see ;p

Title: Chapter 2: All aside in desperation 29 Jun 2007 1:35 pm
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hehee, cool chapter. Snape is a git from beginning to end, front to back, and top to bottom. I don't think he can help it and probably doesn't want to. But you gave him a glimmer of a heart here. I can't wait to see if it develops. 10 points. THE GIT!

    Author's Response: I know you shouldn't laugh at your own jokes, but that bit still cracks me up too. ;)
Title: Chapter 1: An end to a tournament 29 Jun 2007 1:34 pm
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sounds like a good beginning. I like your writing style and your view of Harry's take on things. Good story!

    Author's Response:

    First review! Yay!!

     Thank you.  I've never really thought much on my writing style, but a number of people seem to compliment it. . . 

    It's quite a cheering thought actually ^^


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