Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 09 Sep 2007 8:14 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Briliantly mysterious!
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jul 2007 2:18 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This challenge is always great fun and you have included several fun things. Having the room react idiosyncratically for Harry and not Snape should be interesting. I also really liked how you wrote the last scene. You know Harry's handling of the bloody nose is furiously making Snape think, but it is very understated. Also, if someone hasn't pointed it out, it should be "Dudley and Uncle Vernon had both broken his nose..." not "Dursley and Uncle Vernon..."
Title: Chapter 1 04 Jul 2007 5:42 am
Reviewer: Tilly (Signed) [Report This]
    Ohh, I really liked that- very nicly done!

    The bits about the Dursleys were worked in, which is one of my favorite things to read. Great writing!

    ~Tilly
Title: Chapter 1 01 Jul 2007 6:35 am
Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor, Harry that book thrown in his face must have been heavy...

    Why can't Snape do any magic, like Harry can? What did his note from Dumbledore say?

    Well, I guess I will find out in the next update.

    Great chapter, keep writing!!!

    Author's Response: Many mysteries, I know!  All will be explained, eventually!  Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 9:29 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo. Snape feeling guilty? Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: I think poor Snape is going to feel a whole lot of things before this is over, heh.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 3:35 pm
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    ha, interesting. This seems quite different from the other fics where they are stuck together. I love the use of the Room of Requirement. I wonder about the whole 'warrior' thing... can't wait to find out more!

    Author's Response: Yes, I wonder about the whole warrior thing as well.  Dumbledore put it in my head, and I'm waiting patiently for him to explain himself lol.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 11:25 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good start. Can't wait for more

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I know its a little weird, but bear with me!  More is coming soon.
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 8:34 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very cool story so far! I love this challenge and I like how they are in the RoR rather than a classroom like the others I have read. Excellent so far and please write more soon! :)

    Author's Response: Yeah, I basically got the idea to set it in the RoR, and then it went from there.  More is coming shortly, and its longer than this chapter :)
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 8:29 am
Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was really good! Good writing, good place for the 72 hour lockup, good storyline. I hope you keep it going well beyond 72 hours.

    Author's Response:

    I just love the idea behind the challenge.  I haven't decided how long to keep the two of them locked up together...I think they need more than 3 days to work things out, don't you?

Title: Chapter 1 30 Jun 2007 7:26 am
Reviewer: Carolyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is very intriguing, I am really interested to see where this story will go. You write very well. Please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  The next chapter will be out today!

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