| Title: Chapter 3
| 26 Dec 2020 9:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Severus has got it right about Dumbledore thank you
Well, they did need to battle it out. Dumbledore gave them the right place and circumstances to do it in.
I'm going to laugh if the room gves him a penning for his hard work
| Title: Chapter 3
| 12 Feb 2008 2:12 pm
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| Reviewer: I.M.P.E.R.I.O. (Anonymous)
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OMG! You are better than JK. Love it. You HAVE to write more or I'll wish for that room to come and force you.
'Because you could have turned out like me.'
Beautiful. Also - that's one Heck of a cliff hanger. :D
I'm off to read more.
Lots of lovely angst here. Snape really is being confronted with his past as well as Harry's. And I can't wait to see what the room delivers. Having Snape at Harry's mercy is a really interesting concept in this story.
Can't wait fo you to contonue.... :)
Whoo! Fantastic job, what drama and what Snape is saying- wow. Very unique but so in character. What a job. it makes sense though, Harry brewing with those Muggles like a potions. Nice take on it.
Great job on this chapter. What does Snape deserve? I don't know, a good whallop? No, maybe a mum. :)
You know, this has the potential to be very bad, to wreck Snape emotionally, but somehow I think he's stronger than that. I wonder if the room will do anything at all. Or maybe it'll do something to Harry?
Oh, that was fantastic- loved it. The potions metaphor was exactly the type of thing I'd expect Snape to say after something like that. It just fits. And keepin' away from specifics about Snape's father was very good, in my opinion. I wouldn't expect tons of major confessions so soon (if ever), not from him.
What Snape deserves, I couldn't say for sure, but I don't think it would be too much to believe that he deserves a friend. Aren't I the soppy one? :)
Keep up the awesome writin'.
~Tilly
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