Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 5 26 Dec 2020 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Very tense chapter thank you
Title: Chapter 5 17 May 2008 6:20 am
Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i just wanted to say that this is absoultely amazing! Really, you've captured Harry's innocence and Snape's arrogance perfectly to cannon, I don't know anyone else who has done it better! Really great work!I applause you and really can't wait to see what you have instore for Harry, and Snape, I hope you write more!
    The chapters really do just get better and better!
    Keep it up!
    Luv Kelly: 10
Title: Chapter 5 30 Nov 2007 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    OH! So, so good! The "Good boy," at the end was so great, I always imagined if Snape would ever say something nice to Harry it would be that, for some reason. (Yeah, don't ask, I'm crazy and on a sugar high. Which is funny, cuz I haven't eaten any suger today. Okay, enough rambling!)
    Your story is really great! Snape is very in-character, and the Dursley stuff just wrenched my heart out!
    Keep it up!
    -Elise
    -Elise
Title: Chapter 5 09 Sep 2007 9:08 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    I simply LOVED the sleeping bags! They were so funny and cute - kind of like the dog in Beauty and the Beast!!
Title: Chapter 5 23 Jul 2007 4:28 am
Reviewer: rosworms (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely chapter. cute sleeping bags.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 6:46 pm
Reviewer: midnight rain (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chap! Please update soon!!!!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! GREAT chapter! Wow Snape really is daring and mean to touch Harry's scar like that. Poor kid.

    Best description I've read this monthh: "...his black eyes barely separate from the darkness."

    One typo worth mentioning: "It was covered in blisters, as thought recovering from a particularly nasty burn." though

    I fixed the formatting for you. :) Thanks so much for the update! It makes waiting easier.

    Author's Response: Ooh thanks for pointing out the typo!  I fixed it.  Uh oh, what was wrong with the formatting?  I didn't even notice!
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 4:37 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    This story continues to have many intriguing elements. I wonder what is up with Harry's scar, and the ambiguity you have given Snape so far is different. I'm looking forward to what they find out about each other from the veritaserum. Although I can't believe Snape doesn't have an immunity to it.

    Author's Response:

    Oooh I hadn't considered that Snape might be immune to Veritaserum.  Hmmmmm....

Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 4:14 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Another interesting chapter. At this point, I'm starting to lose patience with Harry. He made such a huge deal out of touching his scar, as though Snape should have realized it would cause him pain, but even Harry said it hadn't happened before. And Harry calculates what to say to be more and more hurtful. Sure, Snape has been insulting to Harry as well. But in a way, Harry seems to be looking for the stuff that will hurt the most - at Snape's greatest vulnerabilities. Odd. If Harry *knows* that Dumbledore's trust and consideration is really important to Snape, wouldn't that be something positive? Yet Harry just uses it to try and hurt him.

    Author's Response: My feeling is that Harry and Snape are both starting to go slightly stir-crazy in the Room, and so are starting to act out.  I don't think Snape would have touched Harry's scar, or Harry been so vicious towards Snape, otherwise.  We'll see how Harry feels about Snape after Veritaserum, I guess.
Title: Chapter 5 19 Jul 2007 2:26 am
Reviewer: Carolyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh things are getting very interesting now...Thanks again for another awesome chapter!

    Author's Response: You are welcome!

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