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Reviews For A Place for Warriors
The chapters really do just get better and better! Keep it up! Luv Kelly: 10
Your story is really great! Snape is very in-character, and the Dursley stuff just wrenched my heart out! Keep it up! -Elise -Elise
Best description I've read this monthh: "...his black eyes barely separate from the darkness." One typo worth mentioning: "It was covered in blisters, as thought recovering from a particularly nasty burn." though I fixed the formatting for you. :) Thanks so much for the update! It makes waiting easier. Author's Response: Ooh thanks for pointing out the typo! I fixed it. Uh oh, what was wrong with the formatting? I didn't even notice!
Author's Response: Oooh I hadn't considered that Snape might be immune to Veritaserum. Hmmmmm....
Author's Response: My feeling is that Harry and Snape are both starting to go slightly stir-crazy in the Room, and so are starting to act out. I don't think Snape would have touched Harry's scar, or Harry been so vicious towards Snape, otherwise. We'll see how Harry feels about Snape after Veritaserum, I guess.
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