| Title: Chapter 8
| 27 Dec 2020 5:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a difficult but very well put together chapter
Good for Harry. I'm glad he got Snape to admit that he wished that Lily had tried to stop him from becoming a Death Eater. I did notice that you had used present tense in this chapter but it read smoothly so I think you made the right choice.
I am loving this story! The characterization of both Harry and Snape is spot on and your dialogue is awesome!
Great job! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh now, *that* was worth reading. I can't wait to see what you do with this. Your Harry makes me cry he's so good. Heartbreaking. And Snape. Ah, Snape. I love how you're incorporating DH into this. Incorporating and making it *work*. Brilliant. I'm favouriting this.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 21 Aug 2007 9:13 pm
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| Reviewer: celtic7irish (Anonymous)
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Hmm...I love this story, I really, really do. Even if I don't review (I tend to prefer to lurk), I check for updates every day or two. *grin* I was just wondering, though...why is this chapter in present tense, when all the other ones are in past tense? I was just curious as to whether or not you has a reason for that.
| Title: Chapter 8
| 20 Aug 2007 9:21 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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Awww! Severus finally told him about Lily.
Waiting eagerly for more!
AAAARRRGGGGGHHH. That was the most deliciously agonizing thing I've read in ages. I can't tell you how much I've wanted to read a scene EXACTLY like this ever since I read Deathly Hallows. So wonderful. I eagerly anticipate the next installment.
It was a bit odd to read this in present tense, but I agree with you. It does seem to flow better this way for some reason. It definitely seems more realistic and more emotionally charged this way.
I'm glad to see that Snape and Harry finally reached somewhat of an agreement regarding their similarities, however tentative that agreement is. They are both more alike than I think they will ever realize.
Snape's admission that he wished Lily had tried to save him was so good. Even though he knows that it was ultimately his fault, he just wanted someone to care enough about him to try to save him.
But, I have to admit, Harry's admission that he feels like his parents failed him by leaving him was so sad, but true.
Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. I'm truly enjoying the story. Thanks...
I suppose you changed your original plan to make it DH compliant,right?
Are you annoyed with Lily too? Cause I were quite disappointed with Lily after I knew the truth. Harry just speaked out what I always want to say after DH.
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