Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 9 27 Dec 2020 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a very tense chapter
Title: Chapter 9 01 Nov 2016 2:57 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The wands backfiring was a surprise and not just for our heroes. Looking forward to finding out why that happened.
Title: Chapter 9 15 Feb 2015 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am thoroughly enjoying this so fa.
Title: Chapter 9 04 Sep 2007 5:39 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    EVIL!!!!!!!!!! What an amazing story.
Title: Chapter 9 01 Sep 2007 7:42 am
Reviewer: lilseverus100 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ahhh a cliffhanger!!! Nooo!!!

    Which chapters are the messages in other then this one?

    Thanks for updating!!!

    Author's Response:

    The messages are in chapters 1, 5, 7 and 9.

Title: Chapter 9 01 Sep 2007 4:34 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Signed) [Report This]
    Not what I expected, having Harry decide to use grief as the emotion to throw Voldemort out. It was interesting to see Snape's reaction to that. And the Oliver Twist line was pretty good.
Title: Chapter 9 31 Aug 2007 7:33 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    "“Yes. In fact, I demand you to do so. I want you to be an emotive, effusive little Gryffindor as hard and as long as you can stand it. Or,” he adds dryly, “as long as I can stand it.”"

    What a brilliant idea for how Harry can learn Occlumency and how sad that he had to use grief.

    The weird wand stuff was intriguing, and Harry having to learn to heal himself is interesting. And I loved the cliffy--the boys must be pretty ticked right about now.
Title: Chapter 9 31 Aug 2007 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Is this really your first attempt at writing fanfic, besides your oneshot? Honestly, it's some of the best fic I've ever read! You have an amazing writing style and pay close attention to details.

    I especially loved the Goldilocks/Oliver Twist exchange... That was hilarious. Each chapter is consistently brilliant. Oh, and the tense shift to present doesn't bother me; it just kind of threw me off for a second in the last chapter ;)

    I just love this story! The minute I finish a new chapter, I immediately go back and read it again. lol. That's how good it is.

    Author's Response: It is my first attempt.  I'm flattered by your praise!
Title: Chapter 9 31 Aug 2007 10:52 am
Reviewer: curlybean (Signed) [Report This]
    I have to say I don't really mind reading this in present tense. It seems to flow really well that way.

    Will we ever find out what Snape's wand core is? I don't think JKR ever said in canon, but I think it would be nice to know. And why did the two wands react that way? My first thought was that it was the Room of Requirement preventing them from leaving. Or, perhaps, one of Dumbledore's many plans of keeping them together.

    Anyway, thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next.
Title: Chapter 9 31 Aug 2007 9:33 am
Reviewer: footontheground (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay new chapter! I'm loving the snarkiness between the two in this chapter. Great dialog!

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