| Title: Chapter 10
| 27 Dec 2020 5:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You brought out the emotion and heartbreak so well thank you
That must have been hard for Severus and Harry. I wonder if it was really the past or just something created by the room? At least, they both have memories of Lily from the experience.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 15 Feb 2015 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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This is very, very interesting. I love this story thus far.
Unbelievable chapter.......please excuse me while I go cry my eyes out.
Wow, was THAT a difficult one!!!
Nice touch, that both children Lily and Severus protect Harry! How poetic!
| Title: Chapter 10
| 01 May 2008 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous)
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It was really good, and it made my heart hurt! I love stories that make it eaasy to feel how the characters feel. I try, but i'm not a very good writer! lol.
| Title: Chapter 10
| 29 Sep 2007 3:36 am
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| Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous)
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"Remember that you deserve better."
You have written Snape's epitaph. Thank you.
Another cliffhanger though! I think it's a really clever idea to use the room of requirement as the room because you have managed to incorporate so many things and experiences into it. It makes the story more interesting and gives a wider variety of experiences for snape and harry to come to terms.
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