| Title: Chapter 13
| 04 Oct 2007 3:36 am
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| Reviewer: Kalispell (Anonymous)
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This story is brilliant! I am enjoying it so much! You have such a deep understanding of the characters - I love this! Thank you for writing and sharing!
Very good chapter! Poor Harry having to remember that horrible moment in his life and shame on Dumbledore for removing it in the first place. He'll probably say something along the lines of how he did it to protect Harry's innocence or some other nonsense. Anyways this was a really good chapter and I'm really curious to see how they'll be acting around each other now that Harry came back.
Wow, this chapter was excellent! I loved that Harry made the choice in a mature fashion to come back for Snape. I was expecting him to come back, but I thought it would be more about his saving people thing rather than a thought-out reason.
Also, I loved the duality expressed in Harry thinking that people always die and they never come back and Snape repeating the same thing. Such similar damaged boys.
| Title: Chapter 13
| 04 Oct 2007 12:54 am
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| Reviewer: lilseverus (Anonymous)
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So Dumbledore returned the memory after this many years? I am so glad Harry caome back to get Snape...
Please, please update soon! Snape better live, I hope he does!
I loved this chapter, and Harry's epiphany, if you will, of Dumbledore's intent, and why he, Harry, had to go back for Snape instead. The final scene was so poignant. Much more so, to me, than the scene in Deathly Hallows. Great work! I look forward to the two men confronting Dumbledore soon.
Can we just talk about how incredibly brilliant this fic is? Every chapter is so consistently well-written. And I've said it before, but I'm still in awe of the fact that this is your first fic.
This chapter was brilliant. Harry finally had a breakdown. I've been waiting for it. lol.
The way you described James' and Lily's deaths was heart-breaking. The details were chilling, but really seemed to bring it all into perspective for Harry...made it more realisic.
I am SO dying to see what happens next. I'm ready to scratch Dumbledore's eyes out! Okay, maybe that's a little harsh, but wow...he's infuriating. lol. Update soon :)
Awesome chapter...hurry up I want to see what happens!!!
| Title: Chapter 13
| 03 Oct 2007 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous)
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poor, poor Snape! And Harry!
Is it dumbledore's intent to break both of them completely? Merlin, I hate that old man.
I have a feeling I know where this story is going but I'm not going to articulate my guess because that I would be embarrassed if it doesn't turn out to be right. This was a great chapter though, but I think it was a bit shorted than I wished! Update Soon!
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