| Title: Chapter 14
| 27 Dec 2020 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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At last they are working together, is this what Dumbledore wanted
I wonder if Snape will be able to act nicer to Harry without his Slytherin students noticing? He does need to keep up his evil bat persona for spying purposes.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 16 Feb 2015 1:48 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I continue to enjoy this immensely.
My favorite lines: "I wonder if you have to do something brave.."
Snape: "Something else, you mean?"
Perfect chapter.
AAW! again I am struck by the absolute sweetness of your James. Usually, I can't stand James, and he's still a git, but, well, 'Fawn' is just too cute.
Better than Pronglet, though I like that too. Finally Snape is being nice. The 'you can depend on me' was so great!Man, I really love this story!
-Elise
| Title: Chapter 14
| 04 Nov 2007 8:51 am
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| Reviewer: Sage (Anonymous)
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That's was great. I sat for like 10 minutes after saying to myself why did I have to read it when you'd only written up to chapter 14! What a cliffhanger! AHH! Can't wait to read what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 14
| 18 Oct 2007 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Smelly Cat (Anonymous)
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"Where is the memorie Potter?" Snape asked with an eyebrow raised slightly.
"Um..I..I ate it?." Lol
You made me cry in this chapter so much emotion! I love this story I have recomended it in my Yahoo group and many other groups I have coe across. I have tried to post a review for other chapters but I couldn't read the sercurity code, lol. I need new glasss. :)
Please update soon! I think you play Harry and Snape beautifully!
I hope Harry doesn't do something he will regret in later chapters.
Like kill Dumbledore, lol :)
I can not beleave this is your first fanfic!!
I am giving this chapter a ten just like I give every one of your chapters.
I am so sad that I read this chapter, now I don't have anything to read!
boohoo! :(
Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 18 Oct 2007 6:02 am
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| Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous)
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What an exciting almost conclusion!!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 14 Oct 2007 8:20 am
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| Reviewer: lilyseverus (Anonymous)
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AHHHHH! A cliffhanger....noooooo....
please, please update I want to find out what Severus will say to Dumbledore!!!
You did a very realistic job with the interaction between Harry and Severus. They know that things have changed, but haven't been able to completely integrate that into their lives yet. I loved that Snape gave Harry a good memory, but chuckled at the "Sickening, wasn't it?"
I know you're playing with the tense of your writing, and the story is still great, but I think I prefered the previous style better. This tense is really hard to get right. It's powerful when you do it perfectly, but can be clunky and detract from the story otherwise. This is just my two-cents worth.
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