Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 16 07 Nov 2007 8:50 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you portrayed the relationship of the Trio and their support of Harry. I'm glad they thought of a way to appease Snape's very reasonable concerns. I'm looking forward to how this will change the rest of what happens in Year 5, and really interested to see how Snape and Harry's relationship changes.
Title: Chapter 16 07 Nov 2007 9:30 am
Reviewer: cathyrf (Signed) [Report This]
    Yikes! Umbridge's sudden appearance really made my stomach queasy (good job on the writing!). Wasn't expecting that!

    Loved the conversation between Snape and Harry (getting their stories straight) and it shows what they've been through that they can communicate in this way.

    I also loved the talk with Ron and Hermione and how quickly they agreed to take the Fidelius Charm. They've always been terrific as a trio! You kept it completely in character for me.

    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

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