| Title: Chapter 17
| 27 Dec 2020 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a truly emotional chapter
| Title: Chapter 17
| 16 Feb 2015 6:07 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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What a powerful chapter! Very intense.
| Title: Chapter 17
| 04 Jun 2011 8:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Summer (Anonymous)
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Jabberknoll feathers go into truth serums. If you want more on potions ingredients, I hope to post some and their uses on my profile. I am not in the mood to log in today.
| Title: Chapter 17
| 17 May 2011 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: M (Anonymous)
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This chapter nearly made me cry. Hermiine's reaction fit perfectly. Keep it up!!!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 17 May 2008 9:54 pm
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| Reviewer: kelly (Anonymous)
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why can't harry depend on Sirius, he is, afterall, his godfather...?
| Title: Chapter 17
| 19 Feb 2008 10:13 am
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| Reviewer: _lacrymosa_ (Anonymous)
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Please please continue soon, or write more stories, you are the best. So in character, so real and raw. Love it.
Wow! An absolutely wonderful story! I must admit, the present tense narration is rather odd, but I think that's mostly because most of the things I read are written in the past tense...but it's very well-written, and I love the plot. You've done a wonderful job with the characterizations; it's not hard to imagine this actualy happening in 5th year. I can't hardly wait for the next chapter!!! *whines* I want more! Now! ...oops...sorry...*ahem* Please update soon!!
I just started reading your story last night. Very interesting. Manipulative Dumbledore for certain. I feel a little sorry for him, but like Harry, I'm also pretty angry with him too.
I was totally shocked by Snape slapping Harry in the face. I've been thinking about that slap all day long. Snape says that he was really frightened when he saw that memory. Was the slap a reaction to that feeling. Is this because he's an abused child himself who finds violence a very easy reaction?
Also, at the very end, what words is Snape doubting? That Harry believes him or that Snape will never hit Harry again?
Thanks. Please keep writing!!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 09 Feb 2008 2:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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CAN YOU PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!! SOON!!!!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 30 Jan 2008 1:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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please write the next chapter SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And please make it LONG.
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