| Title: Chapter 17
| 27 Jan 2008 6:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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WILL YOU PLEEEEEEASE WRITE A LONGER CHAPTER SOOON!!!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me, AGAIN!!!
Thanks for writing this story though. Your doing a fantastic job!!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 21 Jan 2008 6:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE CHAPTERS SOONER!!!! THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME.
Sorry for the rant but i am really enjoying the story. Great Job!
| Title: Chapter 17
| 21 Jan 2008 1:30 am
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| Reviewer: Mafalda (Anonymous)
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I've just finished reading the story and man... am I impressed. Some of the scenes were so well written, so intense and raw. It gave me the impression they were real people somehow. eheeh not making any sense.
Loved it, you've done an amazing job.
Thanks! =)
| Title: Chapter 17
| 20 Jan 2008 6:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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That was a really good chapter. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! don't take a long time to write the next one, i almost took it off my list, thinking you'd stoped writing the story.
Great job though! Thanks!
Wow! I'm glad you are back to writing! Please don't leave us hanging for so long... PLEASE! I love the new chapter and yes ti was worth the wait!
Duuuuude, great chapter! Heart-wrenching and messed up and kind of hopeful but still pretty messed up. Very wonderfully done; I especially like how IC Snape is, even as he's slowly changing. Keep up the good work!
I really enjoyed BOTH chapters! Harry's dark secret - that wasn't just dark, that was pitch black! But you could certainly see why he would consider it at so many times because life at the Durselys was so hopelessly awful. I was furious at Snape for hitting him after seeing it, exactly for the comment that Harry made. How was he supposed to know about anything else at seven years old?
And Snape getting so furious at Ginny and Harry together - Harry's comment was perfect ("you are kind of more messed up than I thought") and made me laugh in a chapter that was so incredibly intense. I love when a writer can give me those two emotions back to back. Because watching Harry's memory for the charm was incredibly sad and intense.
One of the other lines (amongst many) that stood out was Harry's retort to Severus when he ranted that he never considered suicide - "You had Lily." And it's true, because poor Harry had no one.
Now I'm waiting to see what Dumbledore's reaction is to Harry not coming to his office. The chapters were great and certainly well worth the wait.
WOW! Fantastically amazing. Stupendous. Wow. I did not see what Harry did, coming. And that Snape was so upset about it afterwards... he's right though. Wow. I love your dialogue. All the speech interaction was just fanatstic!
My favorite lines:
Harry says nothing. Seems a bit rich, coming from a man who slapped him not ten minutes ago.
A long pause follows this outburst. “You know, Snape,” Harry finally volunteers, “you are kind of more messed up than I thought.”
That was so sad. I am trying not to cry! (sob)
Please update soon! I hope that this story will go on forever! hehe :)
| Title: Chapter 17
| 19 Jan 2008 4:14 pm
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| Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous)
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This chapter was very intense and packed with so much info. Harry's secret was a shocker. Great chapter.
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