| Title: Chapter 19
| 24 Apr 2008 6:44 am
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| Reviewer: iluvchocs (Anonymous)
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This story is amazing. I love the give and take between Harry and Snape, and the way you show their stories and reactions is brilliant. Great job.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 21 Apr 2008 12:44 am
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| Reviewer: Midnight Oil (Anonymous)
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Great chapter. Your characters seem so alive. Please keep it coming!
Very good chapter . please continue!
This was brilliant! I particaularly loved the part where Ron spells the kitten. Also thought the interaction between Snape and Harry was just right. Enough balanced emotion - both positive and negative. You've really got the reactions of them to each other and the awkwardness just right!
Yay! I'm glad they fought again, very much in-character. It's what happens after the happy ending, right?
Please keep the story comin'!
~Tilly
Wow, you finally updated! Though it took you quite a time, it was a very nice lenghthy chapter, so it makes up for it ^^.
This story is full of intence emotions, the deep wounds and sad memories really make it quite an emotional story. I love they way you capture the character's emotions, you can understand how they are feeling and it really makes me attached to the story. It makes me glad that Snape is trying to help Harry, they both need something to look forward to. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please post it as soon as you can! Beautiful work, I can only hope there is some lightness in this story's furture ^^.
I find myself getting jealous at the emerging relationship between Snape and Harry! They really need each other.
If I didn't look twice, I'd swear Snape was 15 too. It's good in the fact that he's in the same boat as Harry but sad in the fact that he couldn't emotionally grow like any young boy should :(
The dialogue is so deeply written, I really have a hard time breaking myself away from this story-- you have a wonderful gift.
| Title: Chapter 19
| 20 Apr 2008 4:16 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB :)!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! That was sure an intense chapter. I felt so bad for all three of them, but I also saw hope that Snape and Harry are going to be good for each other.
Is Dumbledore's plan really to bring the two of them together by causing them to join forces against him?
This is a great story. I have to read really carefully to try to understand the charaters through their dialogue.
Thanks for writing. Hope updates can be soon.
I love when your chapters come out! They are long and full of intersting info. This story has really developed so well from the beginning too! Excellent chapter and I hope you can update again soon!
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