Another chapter that illustrates the unique way you have of showing the growing closeness of Harry and Severus. You can just see them working on each other's hurts and rough places.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 02 Jul 2008 6:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous)
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Brilliant! I like the way that Snape cant stop talking to Harry and that Harry confides in him about James and not knowing when his dad's bday is. He even asks Snape for help! That's a big thing! Not to mention the fact that Snape helped him right away!
Let Snape become Harry's dad please! (By adoption)
Love it! I am very much looking forward to the next chapter :-)
Ah. Sweet ending. I loved the idea of the melting doorways! That was so cool. A very interesting picture of Snape trapped in the Gryffindor common room. Hehe. Also, I like the fact that Snape is admitting his weaknesses, even if Harry won't always admit them full on.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 11:14 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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::cackles::
Oh we're getting a protective Snape!
Bloody brilliant chapter! I'm glad you've updated. I love your interaction between the two of them. ::grins::
Update soon.
Yours,
Lady Julie Snape.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 10:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Floozie (Anonymous)
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gooooood!
more more more more more more more more!
i loved this chapter!!! it was really good, i love the interaction between them. and the fact that they still argue even tho they are trying not too. its very IC of them!! kudos to you!!!
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 9:16 am
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| Reviewer: Missy Eye (Anonymous)
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Yay you finally updated
i liked this chapter, I love the physcology between Harry and Snape that relates their childhoods
great work
Another good chapter! Hope you'll update again soon!
This is a really, really good story.
Somehow I missed your last update, so I got to read two chapters tonight. That was great.
I am very, very impressed with your writing of both Severus and Harry. I think you are truly portraying them "in canon" as they react to the events in your story.
The relationship is being built, but slowly and cautiously and pretty honestly too. It's very difficult for both of them and your story makes that clear. But yet, as a reader absorbed in your characters, I see hope that both of them are going to benefit enormously when everything is finished.
Very, very good job.
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