The last line was great, 'And suddenly he doesn’t mind so much that Snape locked him up.' I was smiling after I read that...in fact, I'm still smiling, lol. It was a good chapter. I love the amount of Severus it has in it!
Thank you SO much for these chapters. It's really nice you've been able to write some more--we've missed your excellent work! Thank you, again!
What a completely fascinating set of lines at the end! I loved the progression that their discussion takes through this chapter.
I absolutely loved that last part. I loved all of it, the arguing, the sadness, the tentative reaching toward each other. All of it was really very good and worth waiting for.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 01 Jul 2008 4:19 am
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! This chapter was interesting. Please please please update again SOOOON!
It was brilliant! I love how you kept them off balance and then finally got them to talk to each other about their childhoods and how Severus is protecting Harry even if he won't admit it. You deserved the Featured Story too!
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