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Reviews For A Place for Warriors
I LOVE HOW SNAPE IS FLAWED, AND AMAZING, AND...FLAWED. also I love how I start reading it, feel how amazing it is, and then forget about it for awhile, forget where I was, and then pleasantly read a bit more, and then do it all over again. Maybe I'll actually finish this time, since I reviewed. XD anyhow. going' to finish now.
I think you meant not for Harry, but for HERMIONE to be the person speaking here. It's 61 lines up from the bottom. Glad to help.
It can be a bit disconcerting at times when the narrative drops into present tense, but most of the time I don't notice because the grip and flow of the story is simply so strong that everything else fades in comparison. You've done an excellent job. I'd love to see more if you ever get the chance.
Harry is very confused about his relationship with Snape right now, and you make is so realistic that he is not sure of where the lines are anymore. Please update soon!!
Harry's talk with his friends seemed to help though. Ron cracks me up, his comments are too funny ^_^ Hermione shocked me with ripping the photo, but she was making a point and the photo could be repaired, so it's alright I s’pose. I still have to wonder what's up with Dumbledore, where'd the old coot disappear to? lol. P.S. So long as you say it's not turning into slash (thank goodness, since that's not my cup of tea!), I believe you :)
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