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Title: Chapter 21 28 Dec 2020 4:00 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter
Title: Chapter 21 04 Apr 2011 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awe - I wouldn't mind if it DID turn slashy.... ;)
Title: Chapter 21 09 Jul 2009 3:13 am
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    THIS IS SO AMAZING.

    I LOVE HOW SNAPE IS FLAWED, AND AMAZING, AND...FLAWED.

    also I love how I start reading it, feel how amazing it is, and then forget about it for awhile, forget where I was, and then pleasantly read a bit more, and then do it all over again. Maybe I'll actually finish this time, since I reviewed. XD

    anyhow.
    going' to finish now.
Title: Chapter 21 29 Aug 2008 8:05 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    "Well, Harry, that sounds more like Snape being a teacher than anything else," Harry says. "Why did his reaction surprise you?"

    I think you meant not for Harry, but for HERMIONE to be the person speaking here. It's 61 lines up from the bottom.

    Glad to help.
Title: Chapter 21 09 Aug 2008 5:29 am
Reviewer: onaleia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is really powerful emotionally.

    It can be a bit disconcerting at times when the narrative drops into present tense, but most of the time I don't notice because the grip and flow of the story is simply so strong that everything else fades in comparison. You've done an excellent job. I'd love to see more if you ever get the chance.
Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story and the interaction between Snape and Harry is so realistic. I hope that Snape does eventually become his guardian; he needs to get away from the Dursleys.

    Harry is very confused about his relationship with Snape right now, and you make is so realistic that he is not sure of where the lines are anymore.

    Please update soon!!
Title: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008 8:30 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice of Snape to give Harry a copy of that photo, but it seems things are always turning between the two. Things flip from neutral to war-zone real quick, poor Harry feels confused about where things stand.

    Harry's talk with his friends seemed to help though. Ron cracks me up, his comments are too funny ^_^ Hermione shocked me with ripping the photo, but she was making a point and the photo could be repaired, so it's alright I s’pose.

    I still have to wonder what's up with Dumbledore, where'd the old coot disappear to? lol.

    P.S. So long as you say it's not turning into slash (thank goodness, since that's not my cup of tea!), I believe you :)
Title: Chapter 21 04 Aug 2008 8:58 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! Keep on keepin' on!
Title: Chapter 21 02 Aug 2008 10:11 am
Reviewer: Cair (Anonymous) [Report This]
    review, please!!!
Title: Chapter 21 01 Aug 2008 5:21 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi! I really liked the bit where 'Harry can't tell if Snape is kidding' And I think (maybe I'm wrong) that where Snape tries to lighten the conversation was well written; where he says: "Snape purses his lips. “I cannot treat you like a ‘normal person.’ You are fifteen.” Also, what I REALLY like, is how you've got Ron *and* Hermione being supportive of Harry and Snape. It's gets so tiring when Ron is always cast as the 'bad guy' and Hermione's imagination runs away.

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