Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 22 12 Oct 2008 10:01 am
Reviewer: Lotiolentus (Signed) [Report This]
    I am hoping for an update every morning. It's TIME!!! Your story is still my favourite of them all.
Title: Chapter 22 06 Sep 2008 10:23 am
Reviewer: Grace (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is an amazing story! You made everyone so in-character.Even when you made Dumbledore a bit evil, you still showed he had feelings. I love how you made the relationship between Harry and Snape so realistic. Absolutely lovely writing!
Title: Chapter 22 02 Sep 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it's good Harry got all this off his chest and that Snape now understands how Harry was feeling the other day. I definitely can see why he was feeling so irked, now that he’s explained himself. Hopefully, things will go a little smoother now, at least for a while. Though, it seems Harry still feels some conflicting emotions regarding Dumbledore.

    Please post again when you can!
Title: Chapter 22 30 Aug 2008 5:30 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    i'm not worried a bit about dumbledore. please update soon, this story is really good, and it might just be me, but it seems like its been a long time between updates
Title: Chapter 22 30 Aug 2008 5:31 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    another brilliant chapter. the thing i love about this story lately is that their interactions always seem to be on the verge of getting derailed / blowing up / going pear-shaped... and yet somehow they always manage to JUST BARELY negotiate their way thru, like a beginning rafter somehow miraculously making it thru the rocky rapids unscathed after a dozen close shaves.
Title: Chapter 22 30 Aug 2008 4:53 am
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    Another stellar chapter. You are working with a Snape who really was petty and vindictive and who is now having to face that and try to change. And Harry is having to learn to open up and figure out what he needs from him. And even though it's hard, it also is hopeful.
Title: Chapter 22 29 Aug 2008 8:01 pm
Reviewer: Buckwheat (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is brilliant, thanks for writing it:)
    I like the way you make Snape so believable and IC.
    More please:)
Title: Chapter 22 29 Aug 2008 6:16 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I love this chapter. I wish that Harry could just get away from the Dursleys and be with Snape. It seems like they have come to a mutual understanding, and I think that Snape, the way he is now, would be so good for Harry.

    Harry really needs a father-figure in his life.
Title: Chapter 22 29 Aug 2008 11:45 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooh. Magnificent. I really like this story. :) Great job. Thanks for the update- another soon?
Title: Chapter 22 29 Aug 2008 5:33 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story. I love how the relationship between Snape and Harry is slowly, hesitatingly, but surely being built. Harry's doesn't understand how an adult can care about him yet still discipline him and Snape doesn't truly understand what needs disciplining and how. But I think they will both learn.

    I do find it interesting that Snape is so insistent about being respected as a teacher when he really has not done anything to give Harry reason to do that. Yes, Harry should give the position respect, but Snape has not earned respect as a teacher. He has not imparted knowledge well to his students, he has not treated them fairly, etc., etc. He can be respected for his knowledge and for his service to the "Light". I think sometimes that in real life those who really do not deserve respect are the ones who must threaten and punish like Snape does in order to get a semblance of it.

    But, anyway, great story.

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